I Recall, Or Do I

How far back can you remember?  I have glimpses of things from babyhood.
Things like a room, a doll, a funny little girl smiling, mother but how can that
even be, because I was just a baby.  

a flowing blue stream I lay upon a blanket birds sang in tall trees
I recall the house where we lived beside a river, the many trees, and picking raspberries with my mother and sister. Father holding me in his arms. Going for long walks in the forest, but I was just a wee girl.
the forest whispered in the shadows creatures hid sweet the dappled sun
I remember the day my sister died, or do I? I was so young that day, and coming from a family of storytellers that retold the story over and over, soon it became my memory.
I often relive the day death took her away the snow was so nice
____________________________ September 3, 2020 Poetry/Haibun/I Recall, or Do I Copyright Protected, ID 20-1283-249-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Consists of 3 Haibuns, Haibun with Senryu Haibun with Haiku, Haibun with Senryu Written for the contest,Let The Pens Flow - Haibun sponsor, Jenish Somadas First Place
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George   Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 11:14 AM
This touched me deeply, dear Heart. It goes straight to my fav's Many congrats! ` elaine
Ashley Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 9:53 AM
A moving poem of hazy recollections, the kind that are so hard to grasp and hold on to. Early memories, both sweet and sad, expressed with exquisite emotions, Constance. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
La France Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 8:53 AM
Susan, thanks for the great comment and congratulations _Constance
Somadas Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 11:14 PM
Congrats Constance for the wonderful win.. Fantastic write..
La France Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 8:22 AM
Jenish, thanks for another great contest and for my great placement, honored _Constance
Krutsinger Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 1:32 AM
This is so gorgeous, Constance. A huge wow! WOW! WOW!
La France Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 4:43 PM
Caren, thanks for visiting my poem and for the great compliment, appreciate _Constance
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