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I Once Met True Love

I once met true love in a pleasant dream, a perfect little world as though it seemed. Time stopped and stood still as our love we shared, we then lost ourselves and all of life's cares. This lovely bright star who pierced my dark, she ruled over my night and held my heart. Dressed in white light as she cast her sweet spell, into those green eyes I then slipped and fell. We danced the hours in midnight shadows, we touched the dew and kissed in lush meadows. Our souls intertwined and became as one, we prayed for the night and cursed the sun. When I awoke, the morn I could not face, a lonely world, she left without a trace. 12/11/18

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Date: 2/20/2019 7:35:00 PM
True love is dream indeed... But as long as its there, we have the option to say Sweet Dreams. Liked this poem very much
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Date: 2/19/2019 3:57:00 PM
As one who wonders about the myriad lives we all live in our dreams-- kudos, Wren!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/19/2019 5:51:00 PM
Thank you L.J., Have a wonderful evening my friend!
Date: 2/16/2019 11:06:00 PM
Well donem, Wren. Congrats on your win.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/17/2019 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Line. Have a blessed day my friend!
Date: 2/16/2019 4:27:00 PM
Such a beautiful Sonnet, Wren. Congratulations on your fine placement in this marathon contest. Sandra
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Date: 2/16/2019 12:51:00 PM
Wren, this is such a beautiful write. How sad it was just a dream :( Congratulations on your win on Mile 18 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/17/2019 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Mark for sponsoring the conest! Have a blessed day!
Date: 2/16/2019 12:28:00 PM
Wren, congratulations on yet another placement in the Marathon contests! :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/17/2019 6:53:00 AM
Thank you P.S.!
Date: 12/11/2018 6:31:00 PM
beautiful sonnet. Missed you around here :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/11/2018 6:57:00 PM
I'm back thank you for visiting and for the comment.
Date: 12/11/2018 4:52:00 PM
if only all our dreams could be so blissful
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/11/2018 5:42:00 PM
Enjoy your night dreams before the morning finds them.
Date: 12/11/2018 12:40:00 PM
Tom I did and I married her. Thanks for the visit, it is always good to hear from you. Have a blessed day my friend.
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Date: 12/11/2018 12:28:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet Wren, Have had those dreams, shame we can't go back the next night to continue it. Tom.
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