I Named Her Clair

Sharp pain sliced like a red rose thorn,
prior to church on Sunday morn.
It felt as though insides were torn,
when she was born, when she was born.

No time to wait, she did not care,
she wailed real loud then gasped for air.
Her twin inside, they could not spare.
I named her Clair, I named her Clair.

The tears inside me never dried,
I felt despair, that one had died.
To give them life, I really tried,
but still I cried, but still I cried.

Copyright © 2013 By Caryl S. Muzzey
6/25/13

Sixth Place Winner ~ "Monotetra" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman
July 16, 2013
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Albanese Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 7:58 PM
I like this poem.
Drug Avatar
July 6, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Brutal! Well written with passion. Makes me wonder what the first through fifth place poems were like.
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 3:12 PM
sorry this onehad to be true. It is a gem of a poem!
Anglesey Avatar
July 11, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Caryl, I feel the deep grief in this beautifully written poem of tragic circumstance. Elegant lines filled with love and pain... Congratulations on your win
A   Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 9:40 PM
Congrats In Kim's "Monotetra" contest....take care...LINDA
Zerbst Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 3:02 PM
Seamlessly put together! What an experience to be remembered in a poem forever, though I feel sad for Clair.
Johnson Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 11:50 AM
Very sad but nicely done. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Merryman Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 11:40 AM
Caryl, congrats on your win with this heart-wrenching write! Love, Kim
Guzzi Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 11:24 AM
so very sad ..hugs..Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Gabriella Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 8:56 PM
I really loved this. So heartbreaking and real. Excellent job.
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 4:21 PM
wow, you took the sad route, same as I and you came up with a wonderful tragic poem. Is it true, dear??? Sorry if it is a true story. I'm faving this one.
Muzzey Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 5:25 PM
Based on truth. Thought of my daughter losing her child and went with it. I'm pretty sure this is how she felt.
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