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I Miss You

I miss you, like the sky misses the stars. like the streets when there are no cars. like a government that has no laws, like music, when it is on pause. I miss you, like the desert misses the rain like an addict without cocaine, like a kiss that misses lips like actors without their scripts.

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Kilalo Mwashighadi

Date: 3/23/2018 4:38:00 AM

This poem is very vibrant. I like it

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/28/2016 3:30:00 AM

Sharon, Very nice concept. Well penned.......//:)hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2016 10:56:00 AM

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Skat A

Date: 5/5/2016 10:56:00 PM

deep to be without....skat