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I Miss You

You will never know how much I miss you, while the splinters of my heart cry silently tear drops roll on dismal path I pave anew, searching for you in ruins of crumbled ecstasy. While the splinters of my heart cry silently, on the trail of sorrow I trudge my life through, searching for you in ruins of crumbled ecstasy when the sun shines on the glinting drops of dew. On the trail of sorrow I trudge my life through, wandering in the wasteland of waning memory. When the sun shines on the glinting drops of dew I hear the echo of songs you used to sing for me. Wandering in the wasteland of waning memory tear drops roll on dismal path I pave anew. I hear the echo of songs you used to sing for me, you will never know how much I miss you.
February 20, 2020 Contest : Pantoum Sponsor : Line Gauthier

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Date: 2/29/2020 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal on your first place win. Really stunning images "splinters of my heart" among so many others.
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Date: 2/28/2020 4:22:00 AM
A lovely write, Subimal! ... ruins of crumbled ecstasy! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 2/27/2020 2:55:00 PM
This is wonderful verse , and I am tickled that you used the Rhyme pattern. Congratulations on your awesome win. Hugs Eve
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