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I Miss Him

The way he looks at me When I’ve made him angry It’s fury but I find it sweet I poke the bear denying peace The toilet seat is down He is not amber around Guess what I have a frown Don’t want to poke bear now I miss his eyes I miss his lies I miss his jokes And claiming broke When he stingy Still loves plenty Miss his face All in my space I miss his touch I miss his love I miss his voice He fills the void When I see him again Will place my heart in his hand

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Date: 2/29/2024 5:04:00 AM
AWH Karen..so touching. Some times it is so hard to let a lover go..I hope you and this special person can maintain a friendship hopefully. Blessings.
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/29/2024 7:10:00 AM
Well he has let me know i can "use" him anytime I am feeling frisky if you catch my drift! lol And hey he is inspiration for a lot of my poems so if I take him up on it new poetry will flow from it lol! I don't know that is really a friend but it definitely has benefits! omg i have no shame! Pray for my deliverance. lololol hugs and blessings
Date: 2/24/2024 11:03:00 PM
Such details about a lover. Wish you luck.
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/25/2024 1:11:00 AM
Thanks Victor
Date: 2/23/2024 4:44:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem about missing, Karen. I like seeing and reading what makes people tick.
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/23/2024 5:46:00 PM
Really? Cool and thanks.
Date: 2/23/2024 4:41:00 PM
such a heartfelt poem about the details you miss about him...liked the 'toilet seat down.' :-)
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Karen Jones
Date: 2/23/2024 5:43:00 PM
Glad you like it Sara!

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