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I Miss- for Contest

I miss the sweet comraderie
The words you'd leave for me to see
The teasing tongue tenacity
I never thought one day you'd be
Away from here, away from me

I miss the way you'd make me smile
Through darkest days, a word worthwhile
Would scatter gloom and chase the vile
Oh, how your charm could so beguile
I miss your certain kind of style

I miss the mystery in the rhyme
The sweet sensation every time
I'd read the most melodious chime
Now that you're gone, it's such a crime
I miss the banter, so sublime

I miss the way you used to tease
Then placate me just to appease
The playful lines were meant to please
My little heart, your lines would squeeze
I miss your spirit's gentle breeze

I miss you, dear, I miss you still
Your place no one can truly fill
I'll wait and wait and wait until
You come back and take up the quill
And let your presence, joy instill

I miss you...

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/5/2024 6:11:00 AM I hope your friend returns. This is well expressed. There was a time when you were away from here that I left several comments on previous poems you wrote just to let you know you were not forgotten. You might want to try that with your friend. You never know what they might be dealing with. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 8/8/2024 6:07:00 AM Dear eileen, its so touching and so sincere, the kind of thoughts we have when we truly miss someone , like how youv said, and from what youv expressed shows that you are a real one that sincerely misses your friend. And i love your rhymes! So creative and rhythmic. Beautiful poem. The ending made my heart warm! “ I'll wait and wait and wait until You come back and take up the quill And let your presence, joy instill” so sweet! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for sharing Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 8/1/2024 12:18:00 PM Beautiful writing, Eileen! The flow was so effortless...loved the last stanza Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 8/5/2024 12:27:00 AM Thank you, dear. Lovely of you to visit.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/29/2024 10:19:00 PM A great tribute to your friend. Brilliant poem. Each stanza with a monorhyme of its own. Great write. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/30/2024 1:29:00 PM Your praise is a great boost to my ego. Thanks ever so much, Victor. You know I enjoy your poetry immensely. As to mention of my friend... last I checked, friends don't just disappear. Maybe I need to rethink that definition.

Richard D Seal Date: 7/29/2024 4:49:00 PM Irresistible, love the phrasing,love the flow, love the feeling, if this does not win I’ll eat my hat, you can choose which one,I’ll send you a list, I have many. Take care, Richard Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/30/2024 1:27:00 PM Well if it isn't Mr. Richard D Seal! I know I said I'd wait and wait, but sure took you long enough to get here! I do hope this does well. Either way, I'm a winner cause if it doesn't, I get to see you eat your fedora. Don't stay away too long. I mean seriously, what better do you have to do in your life?!

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 7/28/2024 1:28:00 PM How we miss those special people who have connected to us in a dear and deep way, yes the markings of their words remain with us forever, thanks for this very tender poem Eileen :) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/30/2024 1:19:00 PM True, my dear. Some people are really unforgettable. Though time and distance come between, word sentiments are forever. Big hugs

Paul Callus Date: 7/28/2024 11:15:00 AM I can relate to missing people: their poetry and distinctive style, the sharing of words, comments, joy and suffering. There is always a chance that some of them will reappear, except for those who sadly passed away. ~ Warm regards & hugs Eileen // paul Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/30/2024 1:24:00 PM True. I've been going over my older writes and reading comments... deleting some things... cherishing others. I read comments by dear ones who have passd on. It's so sad. Some I've collaborated with have either passed away or are no longer a part of this community It saddens my heart. I'm so glad you're still here, dear one, though you've been MIA for a time Big hugs

Eve Roper Date: 7/28/2024 9:43:00 AM This reminded me of your daughter, like if you were talking to her. Soup mail Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/30/2024 1:20:00 PM I'll see her in two days time! I can't wait... that is if the airport stays open. The situation in Lebanon is volatile at the moment.

Hilda Greenhough Date: 7/28/2024 8:42:00 AM This poem is a winner with me. I love how your rhymes impart a flowing story. Good luck with the contest. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/30/2024 1:17:00 PM Thank you for your kind comment. I'm glad it resonated with you.

Joe Dimino Date: 7/28/2024 8:35:00 AM "I miss the way you'd make me smile Through darkest days, a word worthwhile Would scatter gloom and chase the vile Oh, how your charm could so beguile I miss your certain kind of style"-- Superb! The entire poem...you get a FAV from me. "I'll wait and wait and wait until You come back and take up the quill And let your presence, joy instill" -- Divine poetry! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/30/2024 1:17:00 PM Thank you for making this a favourite. Much appreciated. I especially like the compliment, Divine poetry. Bless you :)

Crystol Woods Date: 7/28/2024 7:10:00 AM Wonderful rhymes and so relatable... good luck in the contest! Xo Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/28/2024 7:57:00 AM Thank you for the return visit. Good to make your acquaintance.

Heidi Sands Date: 7/28/2024 6:56:00 AM This is beautifully written Eileen. I miss people too :) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/28/2024 7:57:00 AM I'm sure you do, dear. I guess it's a party of life. Thanks for the return visit.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/28/2024 5:36:00 AM So sweet, Eileen! So many are missed in this community. A fave! Hugs ~ Kim Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/28/2024 7:56:00 AM Thank you for the visit. Yes. I've tried contacting some of them. A few responded. Many didn't. I myself have been away from soup many a time and might do so again if I don't find community.

James Marshall Goff Date: 7/28/2024 12:02:00 AM Nice! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/28/2024 12:33:00 AM What a lovely comment. Just what I needed. You're welcome for tea and biscuits anytime. Thanks for worrying about Lebanon. The threat of war is always looming.

Deb M Date: 7/27/2024 2:33:00 PM Eileen a very beautifully sad poem….its apparent how much this person/poet meant to you and how much you miss them. It is sad when people we care about or enjoy move on! Debx Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/27/2024 2:45:00 PM Yes, dear. It truly is sad. I'm happy that I can read previous poems and comments and that helps. To be honest... I'm sure they are missing being present here

Tom Woody Date: 7/27/2024 1:25:00 PM Saw your comment to SO. Maybe they'll see this and start up again. Sweet tribute Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/27/2024 2:22:00 PM I doubt it. Life sometime gets the better hand. We all take a hiatus now and again. I enjoyed writing for the contest. It"s still a win. It's just reading the funny comments and bantering back and forth makes one nostalgic. You've written quite a few tribute poems yourself. You know what comraderie is.

Jan Allison Date: 7/27/2024 12:09:00 PM I could relate to this big time and wish I'd written it for Darren Watson my wonderful poetry partner - I never check out Jadazzle United now Eileen, just keep with the special memories and he help give me confidence to become the poet I am now:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/27/2024 2:21:00 PM Hey sweetie... you guys were special. I read a post of yours while going down memory lane. How times change. I'm sorry you can't write with him anymore. Thanks for stopping by. It doesn't matter, I guess if this poet doesn't show up or write anymore. I can always read the pervious writes, eh?

Silent One Date: 7/27/2024 11:29:00 AM This could be about so many different people.. but, I think this is for a fellow poet? I can feel the sensation of sadness in your words...Beautiful and touching poetry.. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 7/27/2024 11:37:00 AM Yes. It's for a fellow poet from some time ago who no longer writes. A dear friend...Thank you for the visit. Hope all is well.