I Memorized Your Metaphors

"You are the apple of my eye." Such was my favorite among your love-lines reverberating sincere romance-bloom amidst tenderness' bliss since you did well to lavish me with your care... "You are my everything." Such was never a flattery to me imagining my precious value against your other darling possessions as you just had me as your partner since we were still young... "My world revolves around you." Such gave me cringe the moment I heard it yet you had that proven along your presence which made me comforted and at peace every time you held me close... Grateful am I to God* that you made me feel so loved Until now, your love-filled messages keep on echoing the passion of your heart resurrecting memories of our wondrous togetherness--- ---especially that I memorized your metaphors.
*1 Corinthians 1:9 God is faithful, by whom ye were called unto the fellowship of his Son Jesus Christ our Lord. May 27, 2026 3rd place, "Language of Love" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Ink Empress; judged on 6/1/2026 Poem of the Day, May 29, 2026
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Empress Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 3:58 AM
Really beautiful and heartfelt lines in this dear Beata, your words flow so well and a grateful heart i see through your words. Its always good to be grateful to God. And you shall receive back all that your heart desire. Pleasure reading and placing this in my contest. Thank you for supporting . Congratulations. Sending you light always
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:40 PM
Thanks. God bless you. Thanks likewise for sponsoring contests that help hone poetic creativity.
La France Avatar
May 31, 2026 at 11:51 AM
Beata, wonderful writing and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ~
Nicole Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 9:19 PM
Dear Beata, your thoughts are always so beautiful and uplifting, caressing gently around me and my heart. I'm so thankful for all the many wonderful blessings that surround me. Congratulations my dear sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:41 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His lovingkindness.
Brul Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 5:33 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Beata ^___^
Gifford Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 3:12 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem being featured as POTD, Beata. Beautifully written. Enjoy the honour of your win.
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:41 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His lovingkindness.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 2:08 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading. Yes, we must be very thankful. Great Ending... Hope you are OK... Have a blessed weekend with your wonderful win...............
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:44 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His wonderful lovingkindness.
Anaya Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 1:11 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Beata! Uplifting messages. Enjoy your day
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:43 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His uplifting lovingkindness.
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 11:25 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Beata :) - hugs
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:42 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His lovingkindness.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 9:21 AM
Congrats on POTD!
Croft Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 7:10 AM
congratulations on your POTD
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:44 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His lovingkindness.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 4:30 AM
well penned spiritual poem. congrats on your POTD designation.
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:43 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His lovingkindness.
Kitchin Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 4:26 AM
Beata, wonderfully penned. Congratulations on POTD.
Jones Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 3:05 AM
Wonderfully written Beata! Congratulations on potd!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 2:09 AM
A beautiful tribute poem to your loved one Beata. Congratulations on having received the ‘poem of the day’ award… Beryl
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:41 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His lovingkindness.
Cunningham Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 1:20 AM
A lovely verse paying tribute Beata Congratulations to you on your todays potd honour. Tom
Agustin Avatar
July 17, 2026 at 8:40 PM
Thanks. God bless you with His lovingkindness.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 6:24 AM
What lovely sentiments, Beata! Fave!
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