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Your love is so full of passion n innocence, and the words like im lost in pain. I just got lost in the breeze, the breeze of your love, its like flowers blooming in spring. I juz sat still waiting for you, waiting for the time to stop, I just couldn't wonder what were you, Just another girl or an angel frm d star. But one thing's true , that i love you, for the breeze and the warmth you give. And hearing my cries, one day you stop for me with the time, I can never forget the time you saw me, with those eyes full of love, It was so innocent n full of pain, It made me cry, like a thundering rain, Tat it melt ma heart with all those chains, Clinging to stop me from meeting you, I can't stop now, loving you, I don't really know what it is, but it feels so romantic n true. People here, people there, call these words as poems, but i would say that everyone has a poet hiding in them. I finish my words with some love and care A really amazing love affair, I look at you with despair. Why don't you be ma pair? I love u so much, I want to be with you, I desperately am in need of you, that now i know that the girl of my dreams Is really you. LOVE U AMANDA MILLER!!

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Date: 12/31/2011 7:31:00 AM
thnx ppl!!
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Date: 12/30/2011 4:19:00 AM
Sanjay welcome to the soup, Amanda is a very lucky girl..David
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Date: 12/29/2011 12:58:00 PM
That is the most beautiful thing anyone has ever done for me ... And i beg ur forgiveness fr asking fr ur patience wi me ....for ur love beautiful words n frenship i thank u always n forever Love always Amanda miller
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Date: 12/29/2011 1:02:00 PM
i will wait for a lyf time ... i juz want u to be mine forever!! n i mean completely mine!! im a dog na.. need more attention.. :) love u always..
Date: 12/29/2011 12:41:00 PM
thank you roopesh.. im actually not the poet type. but i really love that angel. she is a awesome poet. n i juz wanna say.. tat i will write more bout her better n better..
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Date: 12/29/2011 12:38:00 PM
I am sure that bhese words come directly from your heart Sanjay...... These words are saying about the feeling you are affected with. I am impressed with those words you have written "People here, people there, call these words as poems, but i would say that everyone has a poet hiding in them". I think that you have to write more so that you can show your talents in writing. I wish Amanda miller comes to you soon. With love Roopesh Krishna
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