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I love a poem that I can understand, not tangled threads(obscurity’s dark web), but glove of silk that slides off Poet’s hand. Newfangled poetry can have an ebb; its words can from the shoreline of my mind recede into their author’s murky sea. Like birds on splendid wing, the poems the kind I need are those which sing with clarity! To soar, a verse best-written is sublime. To such as this I’m drawn, so I essay to pour my thoughts on paper, adding rhyme; then touch them up, succinct in what I say. How strange I sometimes hours might take to write a mere fourteen-line sonnet that is trite! Jan. 23, 2021 for Charlotte Puddifoot's the 'Open Poetry 1' Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/4/2021 10:08:00 AM
A beautifully written sonnet...,a FAV FOR SURE PAngie
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Date: 2/4/2021 9:23:00 AM
I absolutely feel the same. Yet sometimes we write poems that are clear to the writer and lost on the reader, those poems were for ourselves. I missed reading from your ink. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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Date: 1/25/2021 7:59:00 AM
Poems sometimes leave clues on the authors intent, but sometimes it's lost in the "murky sea", Well penned Andrea..
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Date: 1/24/2021 2:31:00 PM
Andrea, Very nice, I enjoyed your Sonnet and best of luck in the contest _Constance
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Date: 1/24/2021 2:04:00 PM
Andrea, Cheville is words not really needed in a poem or prose work. In other words fluffing up a sentence. It is supposed to be funny because of the last line in which I fluffed up the sentence. Sara..It does take time to write. If I can go out on the porch most of the time poetry flows from my pen.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/24/2021 2:14:00 PM
sorry, i looked it up but never saw that meaning. I saw two other things. Oh, wait, I saw "redundancy" so that would be the one you meant. Will have to see it again with that in mind.
Date: 1/24/2021 6:43:00 AM
Hi Andrea, You have penned a good contender for the contest. I, too, enjoy poems that I can understand. If the subject is obscure and difficult to comprehend, then it's difficult for me to really get it's message.Don't get me wrong; I love poetic pieces that you can understand. You, my friend, excel at doing that; you are knowledgeable on various forms, that are well written, poetic, and understandable. Looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/24/2021 1:12:00 PM
I realize that today's poetry world recognizes obsure poetry as the 'good stuff" but I just can't behind it. I do love free verse with great metaphors (as long as I GET them!) Thanks for your comment.
Date: 1/24/2021 5:53:00 AM
Well said, Andrea, about elegance in simplicity of words. I find some poets hard to comprehend as well.
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Date: 1/24/2021 3:48:00 AM
I love this, Andrea... me too,.. me too.. I like poetry that is is clear to me. Love your lines.. God bless you always with love and prayers
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Date: 1/24/2021 3:19:00 AM
Now I would say, 'I LOVE this poem', of yours. Sonnets are always a pleasure to read, like this one above. ' Glove of silk that slides off poet's hand', loved this line Andrea. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/23/2021 10:24:00 PM
I Can understand why i enjoy your poetry dearest Andrea. Having just read a gem of one, and many many more besides..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/23/2021 11:05:00 PM
thanks, Harry.

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