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I Love, I Cry, I Feel

Today is one of those uncertain days It depends on an unknown factor It could the happiest day of my life Or it could turn out a disaster It's not a comfortable feeling to be in And until this factor is known I'll hold my breath in great anticipation To know if this day I'll bemoan I realize tomorrow will still arrive No matter how this day turns out Still have the love of friends on the Soup So it'll all be okay no doubt Silly me and my sensitive heart Us men are made of steel Well this guy doesn't fit the stereotype I love, I cry, I feel © Jack Ellison 2013

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Sarai Virden

Date: 12/11/2013 4:04:00 AM

2am and it's my favorite Jack time. The world around me sleeps and I get to ponder the hearts of my Souper dears... I wish ALL men were like you my friend with the sweetest of souls. Love your poem, love you! XOXOX

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/11/2013 6:37:00 AM

I also absolutely love the very early morning hours when the world is still slumbering! Oh my dear sweet Sarai... you have got to be the sweetest lady on the face of the earth! The things you say to me melt my heart! I will repeat what you so sweetly said to me... "I wish ALL ladies were like you my friend with the sweetest of souls." I love you dearly! XOXOX

Wayland Bunch

Date: 12/11/2013 3:31:00 AM

I really like this one Jack and can definitely relate. Great write my friend.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/11/2013 6:31:00 AM

Very kind, my friend! Thanks once again for dropping by! Best wishes for the upcoming season!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 12/10/2013 2:50:00 PM

Awww, I love a man who not only cries but can also admit to it. I myself have a good eyewash over the smallest little thing. Have a good cry and get done with it. Love ya, Jack. Hugs and kisses. Licia XOXOXOXO

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/10/2013 3:02:00 PM

We're two pods in a peed... er... two peeds in a pod... er... ah got it... two peas in a pod!!! FINALLY! My good, good friend, Licia! Love ya bunch! Hugs and kisses right back atcha! Jackers which rhymes with crackers! LOL XOXOXOXOX

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/10/2013 4:16:00 AM

You are a sweet sweet man, Mr sensitive, a very nice trait to have, I know, I have it too! You're a brilliant man Jack, I just love your heart! You mean more to us than we do to you, trust me you mean the world to me with your awesome humor and tenderness, as well as your awesome friendship that I cherish! What a tremendous poem my friend, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/10/2013 5:29:00 AM

You are the most kind hearted, sensitive man I've ever known, dear Russell! I guess we're two-of-a-kind... we certainly don't fit the stereotyping us males have owned for centuries! Thank you dear friend!

Donna Jones

Date: 12/9/2013 11:03:00 AM

Love ya Jack and if it's news you're waiting for..hoping for smiles!!! We can get through anything!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2013 12:37:00 PM

Turned out positive!!! Thanks for your always sweet words my dear Donna! XOXOXOXOX

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/9/2013 10:55:00 AM

I feel & understand this so deeply. You rock, Mr. Sensitivity Humor Man! =D Yes, SAY NO TO STEREOTYPES. ;-)

Poet Tacito
Date: 12/9/2013 12:37:00 PM

You're awesome, Jack! You need to call in next time!!!!! =D Thank you so much!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2013 12:35:00 PM

You got it, no stereotyping!!! Just listened to yesterday's show! Gotta tell you, I was really proud of my fellow countryman, Mr. West Coast Richard! And to hear that sweetheart from Malta, Charmaine with her gorgeous accent... and of course, the very passionate Eileen! GREAT SHOW as usual Mr. Drake! Kudos!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/9/2013 8:58:00 AM

Of course you do, my dear. Of course you do......One can't help but feel! Lovely poetry from you, Kenny. Hope your day is better now.........hugs

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2013 9:06:00 AM

Just a small bump in the road of life... nothing serious! Thank you sweet friend for always being my friend! Loads of love, Kenny!!! XOXOXOXOX

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/9/2013 7:51:00 AM

With Dragon around we're in the same boat... Never know what will happen... A squirrel was chattering at Dragon this morning and Dragon gave him a hot foot... It's so cold here that ALL the squirrels lined up and chattered... Apparently, any warmth is better than none! They're all following Dragon around like the penguins. They're playing card games and cheating so Dragon gets mad and blows hot air at them! He knows what they are doing and loves it! Not everyone appreciates his Dragon fire!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2013 8:01:00 AM

Good good morning to you and Mike and all your brood, Miss Carol! XOXOXOXOXOX

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/9/2013 7:22:00 AM

hope your day goes the way you want it to, jack! nice poem...

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/9/2013 7:27:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Ilene! You have just proven how all my friends here on the Soup make soooo much of a difference in my life... I am blessed! Thank you dear friend! XOXOXOX