I Looked Over

Sassy Irish lassie that is clear                                                                                      But I think too much green beer                                                                            Teasing with the stripped clover                                                                                    All the fun and games are over                                                                                Awoke to lose her charms, Oh Dear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 6:05 PM
Nicely done. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Beam Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 4:36 PM
Thank you Joyce
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 2:36 AM
congratulations John xx
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April 2, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Thank you Mandy oo
A   Avatar
March 31, 2014 at 9:38 PM
HI JOHN, AWESOME WIN..... CONGRATULATIONS..... LUV~ LINDA
Beam Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Hi again, Thanks very much as always with LUV John
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March 12, 2014 at 3:41 PM
I love it, John. luck comes and goes. no harm in a little teasing. is this for the limerick contest. Wishing you luck. Skat
Beam Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 4:28 PM
Thanks Skat , it can be now.
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