I Like My Body

I like my body when it's with your clothes.
With your skirts and with your hose.
Panties, bras and stilettos -
you must let me BORROW those!
Oooh, they're tight... I don't suppose
you've got these in open toes...?


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07/24/2015
Lycia Harding

For the 'Complete the Line' Contest
Line 3:  ‘I like my body when it is with your..’---e.e. cummings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 8/8/2015 9:47:00 AM
Love your humour, Lycia! You even threw in clues to test us:) #7 Have a nice weekend! // paul
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/8/2015 4:00:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! I like to throw in a little humor every once in a while. xoxo
Date: 8/5/2015 12:04:00 PM
this is just too cute, but I don't wear those....but you would look nice in just my tee shirt I suppose....lol
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Eric Boddie
Date: 8/10/2015 7:52:00 PM
just for saying that, you will get my very next tribute....lol....that was a good one....;)
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/5/2015 2:42:00 PM
I'm thinkin bout changing the title of this poem to, "I Like My Boddie"
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Lycia Harding
Date: 8/5/2015 2:41:00 PM
If it's clean and no stain shows, give it here, I'll strike a pose. If it's not, the same thing goes, I'll just have to hold my nose. Hahaha! Funny
Date: 7/26/2015 9:58:00 PM
hahahaha. I was thinking you were putting yourself into a man's persona because of line two and then realized you were just talking to another woman. Oh wait, you ARE being a man, a drag queen!!! this is really really good!!!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/26/2015 11:31:00 PM
Haha! Yes, you GOT it! The reference line I chose for this contest is from an E.E. Cummings poem that's written to a woman from a man's pov so I thought I'd keep that original perspective and add a silly little twist on the end. I'm glad you like it, I really enjoy writing with humor but under certain poetic parameters I think it sometimes tends to get lost in translation. Thanks, Andrea! xoxo
Date: 7/24/2015 3:11:00 PM
oh I love the humour here Lycia made me laugh out loud - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/24/2015 5:09:00 PM
Hahaha! Such a DRAG. Thank you Jan! xoxo
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