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I Leave You a Kiss

I love to see you snuggled up in bed. Beneath your pillow I leave you a kiss. It’s maternal instinct by which I’m led! I love to see you snuggled up in bed. Then before I go, I kiss your forehead, leaving chocolate for my sweetest miss! I love to see you snuggled up in bed. Beneath your pillow I leave you a kiss. Theme: Leave you a kiss Written 9/9/14 by Andrea Dietrich For the Poet II Poetry Contest of gautami phookan

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Kash Poet

Date: 1/3/2015 12:56:00 AM

sweet poem :) Wish you and Joe a very very Happy New Year!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/26/2014 6:32:00 AM

Andrea so sweet a poem. i cannot comment on this poem. I just enjoy the words."Beneath your pillow I leave you a kiss". I must add it to my fav, right now. Thank you Andrea for this gift. Sooo much love....rajat

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 10/25/2014 10:29:00 AM

Oh, bosh! This is not bad at all. You are too hard on yourself.

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/22/2014 8:21:00 PM

A sweet touch for a sweet blessing. You are a giving woman. J.A.B.

Robin Davis

Date: 9/19/2014 11:56:00 PM

Andrea This is a very sweet and charming poem full of care and love. thank you for the sweet comment on my Engage-ing poem. Yes, he is someone I used to work with

Gautami Phookan

Date: 9/15/2014 1:42:00 AM

This was the sweetest poem in my contest.. What a beauty! Congrats dear Andrea,, wish you well, hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/14/2014 10:50:00 PM

I like Triolet well crafted, Andrea. congrats on the win

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/14/2014 7:07:00 PM

Stopping back to congratulate you for this amazing poem.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/14/2014 6:10:00 PM

Nicely done, Never surprised that you re a winner. C. Love, Joyce

Jan Allison

Date: 9/14/2014 1:41:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun

Date: 9/12/2014 10:23:00 AM

A very beautiful triolet this is my dear friend Andrea. I can feel the sweetness and great love here and, oh my... i am missing my mom. Thank you so much for sharing one of your precious gems tonight. I love it. A winner for me. By the way, i hope you've a great birthday and many more happy surprises may come your way;)). Let me know some pls? :)))) Lovely hugs to you! love lots, Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/12/2014 2:10:00 AM

Wish all mothers could be so loving Andrea. Children never forget how they were treated in their youth and it either makes or breaks them. Great entry!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/11/2014 11:24:00 PM

What a beautiful sentiment...she must be the light of your life.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 9/11/2014 8:25:00 PM

Beautifully written Andrea! What more can I say? Just perfect to me in style and subject. Sweet. Lol...I love writing triolets too. One among so many of the forms that I enjoy using so much sometimes in my poetry writing. The best to you! xxxxx D.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 9/11/2014 7:07:00 PM

A dear sweet poem, that reads like another winner. Happy Belated Birthday, I trust that your day went happily, and was full of smiles. As for poetry videos, I had a friend's help with both of those ones. My only solo attempt remains broken, on this had drive. Editing is such a long process.