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I Know You Know

Onto this world I know You know; as night descends And billions go to sleep, more Remain awake and witness The dawning peep. This morning I saw fire in the sky. Buildings that prior to unnoticed, Shone like gold; like beacons Beaming Temples of the sun! I know and you know it’s because Their made of glass but majesty and Marvel transformed those lonesome Structures into awesome sepulchres Energised screaming forth at last! “Gaze at us you people of this day! We shine for you so you can later Say: We’ve never seen the likes Of this before and never will A sight impress us more!” The golden moment passed; I know you know such Radiance cannot last but In my mind the gold still shines That numinous glare aghast!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/21/2010 6:00:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Date: 4/14/2010 6:45:00 AM
well written, you are very talented!! prozac does not cure the blues. but I find a new day does. thanks for your comments. I am better today.
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Date: 4/13/2010 12:29:00 PM
HI, David, many great images in your poem here as well. Love how you kept that line going: I know that you know. . . thanks for your comment. LUv, andrea
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Date: 4/13/2010 3:32:00 AM
I don't live in the city so I can't say that I have seen this unless on tv or maybe a rare time that I have been in the city overnight...I can feel the scene from your write and what I have seen on tv..Great job...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 4/13/2010 12:07:00 AM
Amuzing poem,so beautiful,I so much enjoy reading you my friend..Charma
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Date: 4/12/2010 10:34:00 PM
Very nice images you painted with words, well done... if you care to return to my poetry, I have completed my poem called, To Heaven's Gate... love Constance
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Date: 4/12/2010 8:33:00 PM
Well penned poem. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/12/2010 8:27:00 PM
Very nice, David, I can see the whole picture you describe. You have an interesting perspective. Great write. And thank you for your nice comment on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.
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