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I Hug the Ocean More Than Any Tree

From shore to deep, the colors of the sea, tan sand and white meringue bursting forth. Can you picture the lovers on the edge long after they're gone? Footprints of fun and frolic. The ghost, of bikini and boxers painted pretty with tropical flowers, on bods. The ocean wall, an enigmatic blue and sand monster like a cloudy day sky. It has the look of adventure as it cascades. I want to climb it’s peak, examine it’s underwings. Toes sink, knees deep, waist high - I’m just an earthling enamored with the mystic sea. When on a cruise deck, and God shut the lights off, except for the moon and stars, I want to lean over - don’t stop me as I dive with my prayers and imagination into the frothing lullaby - its rocking, sloshing, satisfying. I hug the ocean more than any tree. It cools me, surrounds me with danger, love, romance…yes, swashbuckles me, captures me, and lets me go. The ocean let Jonah go and so did the great fish, but I will not let the sea free me so easily. This salt has it in her blood, even standing too close to the rocks near the lighthouse that illuminates a warning. Mrs. Muir saw the Captain in her dreams, full-bearded - the cape cottage window open to the endless tide. The danger now is not sharks nor shipwrecks but the needles in the sand, the chasing off of blanketed lovers by the unsavory beach pirates. Us earthlings must clean up our ebb and flow. Illuminate me on pink sands. Draw me into a rapscallion tale. I shall cross swords on the deck as the sea comes to my rescue.

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Date: 9/18/2023 6:35:00 AM
Beautiful word weaving, your title is so good and so creative! I can resonate and i love the imagery here and especially this line “ the danger now is not in shipwrecks or sharks” so true. Sharks are harmless here, we swim with them. Theres so much more more dangerous. Intriguing and very well crafted write: thank you for writing. Congratulations
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2023 9:44:00 AM
Thank you I.E.! I appreciate you! Hugs
Date: 9/17/2023 7:58:00 PM
Love this one, from the title, right through all the imagery. And after all, trees are for the birds, eh?!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2023 5:25:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 9/17/2023 2:52:00 PM
This is a gorgeous poem Kim full of vivid scenes. Wonderful lines, ‘tan sand and white meringue bursting forth’, ‘into the frothy lullaby’. Splendid! I love the title. Captivating like your poem. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. X :):)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2023 5:36:00 PM
Thank you, Christina!
Date: 9/17/2023 10:14:00 AM
Fun to read. We have a planet covered with water. There was a NY Times crossword clue recently about an author who said we should have called the planet "Ocean." It was Arthur C. Clarke. In any case, we have to love it enough to take care of it. I C you (old salt) have that love. It's not a bad thing to love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2023 10:15:00 AM
Thank you, Duke! Loved your comment!
Date: 9/16/2023 8:07:00 PM
Kim your writing is captivating and filled with vibrant details, drawing readers into an enthralling tale of an oceanic adventure. The title and poem are both enticing and leave readers eager to delve deeper into the story.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2023 10:16:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Lasaad!
Date: 9/16/2023 1:19:00 AM
Magnificent poem, Kim. I know you love cruises and the ocean is in your blood. Well done. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2023 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, my sweet friend! I smile big when your name pops up. I do love the ocean! :)
Date: 9/15/2023 5:42:00 PM
Such a fun adventure of a poem, Kim, on, over, and in the sea. Love the title, too.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2023 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, David!
Date: 9/15/2023 5:11:00 AM
Beautifully written, Kim. Love this!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2023 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Charles!
Date: 9/14/2023 10:12:00 PM
An amazingly beautiful poem Kim…l love it! Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2023 8:01:00 AM
Thanks, Deb!
Date: 9/14/2023 9:37:00 PM
Intriguing tale of the oceans adventure, Kim. Nice title and poem. Have a nice day! Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 9/14/2023 6:12:00 PM
I love the way you've built in the ebb and flow of your rhythm. The lines, 'The danger now is not sharks nor shipwrecks but the needles in the sand, the chasing off of blanketed lovers by the unsavory beach pirates.' is why I prefer trees. Besides, no one wants to see me in a speedo.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2023 7:22:00 PM
LOL to the speedo! Even those that wear one I don’t want to see.
Date: 9/14/2023 5:30:00 PM
very inspiring poem, thanks yann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2023 7:22:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/14/2023 12:05:00 PM
Nice images; I liked the part of you praying before jumping in... :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2023 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 9/14/2023 10:02:00 AM
The ocean wall, an enigmatic blue and sand monster like a cloudy day sky. It has the look of adventure as it cascades---beautifully expressive write, Kim. Oceans are precious for human life.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 9/14/2023 9:08:00 AM
Wow this is such a beautiful oceanic poem that highlights vivid emotions that come associated with the seas and marine worlds.. You've blended the depth so well here with such a mesmerizing use of imagery. "This salt has it in her blood" So beautiful.. Very creatively done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2023 10:47:00 AM
Thank you, Hiya!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/14/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, Hiya!

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