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I Hear the Crows Call

I hear the last calls of the crows I saw One winter day, when all I needed was to see you But you were gone, where they flew So, I spoke to your grave in the empty graveyard I still know that you heard me Even though, all I could see were Christmas Trees, Laid upon graves in the snow, in memory For many people there, in this place A place of rest, a place to feel closer to those who passed A plastic police car was left at yours To celebrate all your years of service But, nothing seemed to compare to what you gave to me Since that day I heard the calls of the crows, I walked away and in spirit, you followed me Heidi Sands 12/29/18

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Date: 12/30/2018 7:32:00 AM
The painful memories find comfort in feeling and touching and seeing things that we remember fondly. You wrote well about the coping mechanism.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/30/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Vijay. I have written about this before, as you probably know. But, writing helps :) I appreciate your support always!
Date: 12/29/2018 11:34:00 PM
One cannot read this poem, comment and then click away without the emotion it emanates staying with them, at least this one can't. The feel and the imagery are heart-tugging. Different topic: I just read your bio and you are one impressive individual, so many talents, Heidi! I picture you with high energy that matches your ample abilities. I live in Virginia, but love New England where I've vacationed in addition to living in Massachusetts in the 1st and 2nd grade. All the best to you - CayCay
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/30/2018 5:51:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much CayCay. That means so much to me. Yes, I am very motivated. I have traveled through Virginia and like it there. Yes, New England is very nice. New Hampshire is beautiful! Great to hear from you. I appreciate your comment. Have a nice day! :)
Date: 12/29/2018 7:07:00 PM
This could be as real as the sun that shines...it opened my imagination...All the best Heidi...Happy New Year...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/29/2018 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Arturo. That means a lot to me. I hope you have a New Year filled with happiness, peace and love.! :)

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