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I Hear It

In the stillness of dawn I hear the sounds from within Echoes of silence, of life Of infinity, of love On the edge of a new day I hear the call I feel the urge of rebirth Of growth, of poetry and life AP: 1st place 2020 Submitted on April 8, 2018 for STANDARD CONTEST NO.80 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Greg Gaul

Date: 4/11/2018 1:59:00 PM

Line, what an interesting poetic conceit to write about the unhearable aspects of life and its edges. And then, commenting on what you do "hear". Obviously, well done and with finesse. Congrats on your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2018 3:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely and very poetic visit and comment, Greg.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/11/2018 11:11:00 AM

WOW! Congratulations on a well-deserved, top win! I feel the power and depth of this piece - so much said in a few powerful lines! Well done, Line! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2018 11:52:00 AM

Thank you, Pandita, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

L. J. Carber

Date: 4/11/2018 8:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Line-- you capture that mystical feeling of life being born that daybreak brings (much as sunset might evoke dying, at least to this poet).

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2018 10:09:00 AM

Thank you so much, L.J., for your most appreciated visit and visit. Line xx

Jan Allison

Date: 4/11/2018 7:52:00 AM

many congrats Line:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2018 7:58:00 AM

Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/11/2018 12:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful, tender poetry.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2018 7:58:00 AM

Thanks, Susan. Much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/10/2018 11:26:00 PM

Lovely time of day, life awakening. Congratulations Line. Tom

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2018 7:59:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Tom.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/10/2018 7:45:00 PM

Beautifully written, Line, and so much power in so few words! I love your poem and congratulations on your top of the podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2018 7:51:00 PM

Thanks, Sandra, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/10/2018 6:57:00 PM

What an absolutely beautiful poem, Line: So stark in its seeming simplicity, yet containing worlds of possibility within the borders of its eight lines. A very well-deserved trophy win for you! So happy for your success!! Best always, :) Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/10/2018 7:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon, for your very appreciated visit and comment.