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I Had To Let Her Go

Tiny purple tipped fingers Desperately clinging to mine I hope she knows, I had to let go Leaving my baby behind The hall that stretched before me Now, longer than before Had me thinking, I was sinking In between the doors I turned my back to her crying That was the hardest part But she couldn't see, that just like she I had a broken heart Outside, the rain was pouring To flood my cherry on top My eyes drained to join the rain I prayed that it would stop I eventually made it home Sat still for a long, long time The screeching sound of letting her down Bounced about my mind I always knew I would struggle Watching my children grow But because it means, stronger wings I had to let her go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/12/2017 3:07:00 PM
I wish this was fiction, but it sounds too realistic for that, Anna. This is very heartbreaking, but who are we to judge the reasons why some things have to be done! My friend went through the same experience some 30 years ago...now her son, given up for adoption, has turned up at her door..she is in 7th heaven! Regards // paul
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Anna Hopper
Date: 8/14/2017 6:15:00 AM
Thank you for commenting! This was actually describing my daughter's first day of kindergarten. Maybe dramatic, but it was super emotional.
Date: 8/9/2017 11:27:00 AM
This poem is so heart-wrenching I had a hard time reading it because of the tear that was in my eye! This is a very sentimental write my friend, such a powerful piece, nicely done, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/9/2017 11:21:00 AM
Heartfelt and touching. So sad. Put a tear in my eye just felt your pain...
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Date: 8/9/2017 11:04:00 AM
Very sad Anna. I can feel it in your words. Well done.
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Date: 8/9/2017 10:14:00 AM
It takes a strong person to let go knowing it is for the better. Thank you for sharing.
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