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I had a dream last night that I was in a northern train, journeying through snowflakes falling; and we seemed to be crawling. I could see magical flakes fall onto the trees and ground, everything was a blanket of white; that sparkled so bright, My dream train traveled on- curving into the wilderness, I saw deer standing still to watch us; and licking snow with no fuss. Birds rested on gnarled branches of the tangled winter trees, singing a beautiful twittering song; and in my dream I sang along. Soon, I was stirring for it was time to come back to my world, and I saw snow had fallen outside; still- the flakes drift and collide. __________________________ December 30, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/I Had A Snowy Dream Copyright Protected, ID 18-1099-537-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to January 2019 Standard Contest Sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 1/8/2019 10:26:00 PM
Lovely, Constance.
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Date: 1/9/2019 12:23:00 PM
Line, thank you so much for the lovely ~
Date: 1/8/2019 4:48:00 PM
Terrific poem, Constance!:-) Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!
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Date: 1/8/2019 8:27:00 PM
Edward, thanks for the terrific and the congratulations ~
Date: 1/8/2019 9:51:00 AM
Constance, congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Wonderful wintery images in your dream. I try to stay away from the snow, my dreams are about a warm beach and white sand. :) John
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Date: 1/8/2019 8:28:00 PM
John, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats ~
Date: 12/30/2018 4:20:00 PM
such pretty imagery Constance and I love the gif:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2019 9:51:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the visit and the compliment, appreciate ~

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