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I Had a Snowy Dream

I had a dream last night that I was in a northern train,
journeying through snowflakes falling;
and we seemed to be crawling.

I could see magical flakes fall onto the trees and ground,
everything was a blanket of white;
that sparkled so bright,

My dream train traveled on-   curving into the wilderness,
I saw deer standing still to watch us;
and licking snow with no fuss.

Birds rested on gnarled branches of the tangled winter trees,
singing a beautiful twittering song;
and in my dream I sang along.

Soon, I was stirring for it was time to come back to my world,
and I saw snow had fallen outside;
still-  the flakes drift and collide.

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December 30, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/I Had A Snowy Dream 
Copyright Protected, ID 18-1099-537-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted to January 2019 Standard Contest 
Sponsor, Brian Strand

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 10:26 PM
Lovely, Constance.
La France Avatar
January 9, 2019 at 12:23 PM
Line, thank you so much for the lovely ~
Ibeh Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Terrific poem, Constance!:-) Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!
La France Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 8:27 PM
Edward, thanks for the terrific and the congratulations ~
Gondolf Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 9:51 AM
Constance, congrats on your win in Brian's contest. Wonderful wintery images in your dream. I try to stay away from the snow, my dreams are about a warm beach and white sand. :) John
La France Avatar
January 8, 2019 at 8:28 PM
John, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats ~
Allison Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 4:20 PM
such pretty imagery Constance and I love the gif:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
January 1, 2019 at 9:51 PM
Jan, thanks for the visit and the compliment, appreciate ~
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