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I Got a Love

I got a love that's never gonna die
Your love has breathed new life into me,
has filled my heart that was once empty
I got a love that's alive and spry
A fragrant violet voice has revived the old bones,
turning back the clock is a good thing
Gave me a pep in my step, a soul zing
Your love rekindled the flame that was long gone

How could you know that you would affect me so,
make me to rise up from my slumbering deep
Go walking to the garden of orchid waking dreams
A shower of kindness make the seeds of your love grow,
blossoms of smiles move my undressed heart to weep
My love for you will never die, for it has been redeemed

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Stewart Watkins Date: 11/19/2017 11:31:00 AM Lovely 'love poem', Freddie. I enjoyed the read. Very energetic and spry! Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 6/19/2017 1:53:00 PM Very nice love story :) Login to Reply

Jannie Breedt Date: 1/10/2017 12:09:00 AM The romance is just all over the page. Lovely Login to Reply

Paloma P Date: 12/10/2016 5:10:00 PM Such beautiful sentiments Freddie, 'garden of orchid waking dreams, is sublime. :) Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 12/8/2016 7:19:00 PM Freddie ,this is a beautiful love poem.It made my heart melt.I enjoyed reading this poem. Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/8/2016 10:45:00 PM Ty, Darlene. I appreciate your loving comments. May love and joy be with you always.

Daniel Turner Date: 11/30/2016 8:16:00 AM Freddie congratulations on POTW. Well deserved:) Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 11:07:00 AM Ty, Daniel. I am floored over it. But I'm inspired by all of you wonderful poets/poetesses. Love always to you.

White Wolf Date: 11/30/2016 12:14:00 AM I missed this gem somehow RW! I guess congrats are in order if it's not too late! Look after that golden pen my brother! Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 11:06:00 AM Ty, Rick. I'm using your pen, in case you forgot. Heh heh heh. Love you, bruh.

Manmath Dalei Date: 11/28/2016 11:38:00 AM Fantastic poetry. Congratulation for ur well deserved POTW. A big 7 from me. Loved ur thought...............//hugs Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 11:05:00 AM Ty, Manmath for the big props. It is much appreciated. Love and peace to you.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia Date: 11/28/2016 3:40:00 AM lovely :) rating... Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 11:04:00 AM Ty, RSSE. If you say it is like that, then so it is. Much love to you, sista.

Bernard F. Asuncion Date: 11/27/2016 5:21:00 PM nice love poem..... Congrats on being chosen poem of the week.... Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 11:03:00 AM Ty, Bernard. I appreciate your supportive words, they spur me to write even better poems. Love you, brother.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/27/2016 1:51:00 PM - A perfect poem for this week, Freddie - Congratulations, well deserved - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 11:01:00 AM Ty, Anne-Lise. Your support means the world to me. Love you, dear lady.

Sunlite Wanter Date: 11/27/2016 11:19:00 AM Garden descriptions - so moving. Late love? Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 11:00:00 AM Sunlite, get out of my head, will ya. LOL! Ty for the lovely comments. True romantics never kiss and tell. Love always.

Alexis Y. Date: 11/27/2016 10:03:00 AM OmG! Freddie, I'm thrilled that you got poem of the week. Congratulations my friend. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 10:59:00 AM Aw, shucks. I'm just so thrilled too, considering all of the fabulously talented poetesses/poets there are at PSoup. Many blessings of love to you.

Gary Bateman Date: 11/23/2016 2:49:00 PM Hello Freddie, As promised -- I'm dropping by to take a look at your poetry. This is a very find Italian Sonnet. I like the tenor and tempo of your verses. And, I believe, your last three verses in the Octave portion of your sonnet make the reader certainly take notice. The next-to-last verse: "blossoms of smiles move my undressed hear to weep" (for me) is really emotive and quite powerful!! Excellent Work!! A SEVEN and A FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 10:57:00 AM Ty, Gary. Sorry I haven't gotten around to reading some of your work, will make it a point to do so, friend. Love you always.

Alexis Y. Date: 11/23/2016 8:13:00 AM Hi Freddie, Love can do wonders in a person's life. You expressed that fact very well in this beautiful Sonnet. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Well done. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis PS. Outstanding Italian Sonnet btw. Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 10:55:00 AM Ty, Alexis. I love the support you have always shown me. Much love and more love to you and yours.

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/23/2016 7:13:00 AM The sentiment is heartfelt & pure. Light & Love Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 10:54:00 AM Ty, Debbie. Love is the elixir of life, is it not. Love and joy to you.

Chris Green Date: 11/23/2016 6:04:00 AM Such a beautiful and heart touching poetic offering my friend. This defines a love that most can only hope of finding someday. This was beautiful. Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/2/2016 10:52:00 AM Ty, Chris. Love is grand, ain't it. Love you, bro.