Freddie Robinson Jr. Poet Italian Sonnet

I Got a Love

I got a love that's never gonna die
Your love has breathed new life into me,
has filled my heart that was once empty
I got a love that's alive and spry
A fragrant violet voice has revived the old bones,
turning back the clock is a good thing
Gave me a pep in my step, a soul zing
Your love rekindled the flame that was long gone

How could you know that you would affect me so,
make me to rise up from my slumbering deep
Go walking to the garden of orchid waking dreams
A shower of kindness make the seeds of your love grow,
blossoms of smiles move my undressed heart to weep
My love for you will never die, for it has been redeemed

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Stewart Watkins November 19, 2017 at 11:31 AM Lovely 'love poem', Freddie. I enjoyed the read. Very energetic and spry!

Debbie Duncan June 19, 2017 at 1:53 PM Very nice love story :)

Jannie Breedt January 10, 2017 at 12:09 AM The romance is just all over the page. Lovely

Paloma P December 10, 2016 at 5:10 PM Such beautiful sentiments Freddie, 'garden of orchid waking dreams, is sublime. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu December 8, 2016 at 7:19 PM Freddie ,this is a beautiful love poem.It made my heart melt.I enjoyed reading this poem. Freddie Robinson Jr. December 8, 2016 at 10:45 PM Ty, Darlene. I appreciate your loving comments. May love and joy be with you always.

Daniel Turner November 30, 2016 at 8:16 AM Freddie congratulations on POTW. Well deserved:) Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 11:07 AM Ty, Daniel. I am floored over it. But I'm inspired by all of you wonderful poets/poetesses. Love always to you.

White Wolf November 30, 2016 at 12:14 AM I missed this gem somehow RW! I guess congrats are in order if it's not too late! Look after that golden pen my brother! Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 11:06 AM Ty, Rick. I'm using your pen, in case you forgot. Heh heh heh. Love you, bruh.

Manmath Dalei November 28, 2016 at 11:38 AM Fantastic poetry. Congratulation for ur well deserved POTW. A big 7 from me. Loved ur thought...............//hugs Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 11:05 AM Ty, Manmath for the big props. It is much appreciated. Love and peace to you.

Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 28, 2016 at 3:40 AM lovely :) rating... Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 11:04 AM Ty, RSSE. If you say it is like that, then so it is. Much love to you, sista.

Bernardo F. Asuncion November 27, 2016 at 5:21 PM nice love poem..... Congrats on being chosen poem of the week.... Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 11:03 AM Ty, Bernard. I appreciate your supportive words, they spur me to write even better poems. Love you, brother.

Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2016 at 1:51 PM - A perfect poem for this week, Freddie - Congratulations, well deserved - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 11:01 AM Ty, Anne-Lise. Your support means the world to me. Love you, dear lady.

Sunlite Wanter November 27, 2016 at 11:19 AM Garden descriptions - so moving. Late love? Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 11:00 AM Sunlite, get out of my head, will ya. LOL! Ty for the lovely comments. True romantics never kiss and tell. Love always.

Alexis Y. November 27, 2016 at 10:03 AM OmG! Freddie, I'm thrilled that you got poem of the week. Congratulations my friend. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 10:59 AM Aw, shucks. I'm just so thrilled too, considering all of the fabulously talented poetesses/poets there are at PSoup. Many blessings of love to you.

Gary Bateman November 23, 2016 at 2:49 PM Hello Freddie, As promised -- I'm dropping by to take a look at your poetry. This is a very find Italian Sonnet. I like the tenor and tempo of your verses. And, I believe, your last three verses in the Octave portion of your sonnet make the reader certainly take notice. The next-to-last verse: "blossoms of smiles move my undressed hear to weep" (for me) is really emotive and quite powerful!! Excellent Work!! A SEVEN and A FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 10:57 AM Ty, Gary. Sorry I haven't gotten around to reading some of your work, will make it a point to do so, friend. Love you always.

Alexis Y. November 23, 2016 at 8:13 AM Hi Freddie, Love can do wonders in a person's life. You expressed that fact very well in this beautiful Sonnet. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Well done. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis PS. Outstanding Italian Sonnet btw. Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 10:55 AM Ty, Alexis. I love the support you have always shown me. Much love and more love to you and yours.

Debbie Guzzi November 23, 2016 at 7:13 AM The sentiment is heartfelt & pure. Light & Love Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 10:54 AM Ty, Debbie. Love is the elixir of life, is it not. Love and joy to you.

Chris Green November 23, 2016 at 6:04 AM Such a beautiful and heart touching poetic offering my friend. This defines a love that most can only hope of finding someday. This was beautiful. Freddie Robinson Jr. December 2, 2016 at 10:52 AM Ty, Chris. Love is grand, ain't it. Love you, bro.