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I Go To a Place of Memories

I go to a place of memories That haunt my vivid dreams On a winding path I walk, The path is always there ; Old oaks bend their branches, Of dripping leaves and moss ; The grass is emerald green, And many birds chirp unseen, Chipmunks scurry here and there, Running up and down the trees. And all around are flowers bright They flutter in the breeze. She waits beyond this bend; Oh she was my sister love. How we liked to play and play, Until that sad, dark day, She went to be an angel above. I think it was God's will. A rose I place upon her grave, And now I write the pain. The last time I saw my sister love, She lay in repose so sweetly; Her lips were rosy in death stillness. Arms folded as if in prayer, I kissed her cold dead cheek, And I will remember her ; Sleeping in her eternal ever rest, Her dress of the softest pink. The years have slipped past me, I am no longer a little girl ; But a woman of many years, Yet when I walk this path, I go back to that sad day. The day I watched sister love, Lowered into the earth below; Mother Earth opened wide, And then she was a memory. A memory that will haunt me, In all my days that remain ; This place of deep sorrow, A winding path beneath the trees, A name upon cold stone ; In poems inspired I write the pain, Of a my beloved sister love ________________________ August 15, 2015 Poetry/Verse/I Go to a Place of Memories Copyright Protected, ID 15-699-974-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, No More Masks, sponsor, Catie Lindsay 8th Place

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Date: 10/2/2015 10:13:00 PM
Broken, congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2015 2:46:00 PM
So sad, Broken, but so emotional and well written to convey the pain in your broken heart. Magnificent echo of your chosen inspirational poem. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/1/2015 10:35:00 PM
You really excel on sad themes, Broken. Poignantly beautiful. Congrats!
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Date: 8/16/2015 5:01:00 PM
Wow!!!! What a great write, I flows eloquent and a deep sad touched. Excellence...........A.M.
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Date: 8/15/2015 6:01:00 PM
A poem of true sadness written in beauty, loss has its own arms and none know its touch unless they have known loss.
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Date: 8/15/2015 1:13:00 PM
wow, you really did well emulating this poet!! Probably I will do Sara Teasdale again if I take up this challenge. She is the only female poet I know much about in that period of time chosen for this contest. You did superbly. So sad about your sister, Constance. you chose well to find an author whose experience so closely matched your own.
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Date: 8/15/2015 11:48:00 AM
BW, this poignant pulled at my heart strings.I too have lost a sibling. I wonder about my little brother often. Thank God for the precious memories. BW, your pen is so amazing because it comes from the heart. Thanks for sharing this moving write:-) Alexis 7
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Date: 8/15/2015 10:57:00 AM
I'm so sorry that you lost your sister, BW. Oh...the pain remains...but so do the sweet memories. I know this pain. It cuts deep. You have immortalized her with your beautiful write, my dear. You touched my heart. Sending love.
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Date: 8/15/2015 8:42:00 AM
I hope this is an imaginary event. This is beautifully expressed Constance. It has the feel of a classic poem.
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