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Poetry/Than-Bauk/I Go
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1595-492-04
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 04, 2023
For the International Contest, Something Bauk-tiful
sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 11/17/2023

First Place

Snow Heart Rose

With a rose red for the dead, where unsaid words ... hurt.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/30/2023 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win, Constance. Regret is a deeply troubling experience that you have perfectly articulated. Advent blessings to you!

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2023 1:40:00 PM

Sam, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings

Terry Miller

Date: 11/20/2023 3:48:00 AM

Well-deserved placement, congratulations

Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2023 2:30:00 PM

Terry, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/17/2023 8:55:00 PM

Aww…heartfelt! Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 11/19/2023 4:44:00 PM

Kim, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, blessings

Charles Messina

Date: 11/17/2023 4:12:00 AM

Love this, Constance. Congratulations on your win! Blessings..

Constance La France
Date: 11/17/2023 10:51:00 AM

Charlie, thank you for the contest and my placement, appreciate. I loved writing this poem for you and thanks for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/5/2023 1:59:00 AM

A masterful poem Constance. This form is not easy but you made it look so natural as also meaningful.

Constance La France
Date: 11/6/2023 9:07:00 PM

Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment, you are right only 3 lines and 4 syllables but not easy, blessings