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I Found You

I found you at the mountains to see I found you at the river flowing by I found serenity waiting for me I found you watching the light butterfly I found you at sunset, colors in the sky I found you at the river flowing by I found you where I had nothing to try I found you in the waves, splashing at sea I found you at sunset, colors in the sky I found you alone, with no-one with me I found you in the bright garden flowers I found you in the waves splashing at sea I found you in the light falling showers I found you watching the animals play I found you in the bright garden flowers I found you in sunrise of a new day I found you at the mountains to see I found you watching the animals play I found serenity waiting for me Heidi Sands 12/9/17

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Md Johnson

Date: 12/22/2017 9:04:00 AM

A very pleasant read.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/22/2017 9:08:00 AM

Thank you . I appreciate your comment :)

Silent One

Date: 12/13/2017 4:29:00 PM

So lovely... like a hymn...

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/13/2017 4:40:00 PM

I just saw your lovely poem too. Thank you Silent One :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/12/2017 9:40:00 AM

Aw, serenity!!!, I am so glad you found it and hope it remains !!! A lovely expression!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2017 9:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Mike! Your comments mean a lot to me :)

Roy Pett

Date: 12/11/2017 6:53:00 AM

I like everything about this Terzanelle Heidi, great theme and really like the repetition, brilliant poetry. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/11/2017 7:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Roy. I was questioning it earlier, so I am happy you like it ! :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 12/10/2017 2:09:00 PM

I'm glad I found it, and found it is a beautiful joy reading. Miss Heidi, sending you warm hugs and smiles on this cold Sunday afternoon :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 2:11:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind comment Akkina. I hope you stay warm. Take care :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/10/2017 11:58:00 AM

this is a feel-good write; a joy to read you today, heidi.. huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 1:08:00 PM

Thank you Nette :)

John Gondolf

Date: 12/10/2017 9:15:00 AM

Heidi, I love this poem about the serenity of nature. Enjoyed reading it this morning. John

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 1:08:00 PM

Thank you John! I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/10/2017 7:32:00 AM

A joy to read--you are an expert creator in this form..this is quite scenic and creative!

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 7:33:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay. I was going to delete it, because I had rushed it, but I guess it will stay for now lol :)

Bernard Chan

Date: 12/10/2017 5:37:00 AM

Love the repitition of "I found you" working like a chant to weave the nature descriptions together and reinforce the feeling of serenity. Meditative and calming. Wonderful.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 5:52:00 AM

Thank you Bernard :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/9/2017 8:58:00 PM

Beautiful scenes of nature brings serenity...Nicely penned Heidi...best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/10/2017 5:52:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)