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One day, I went for a forest walk feeling sad, there was a great heaviness in my heart; I could not even express why I felt so bad, but, I think my life was falling apart. Soon, I came upon a gentle slow flowing stream, where a majestic old oak tree stood guard; I looked at the old tree like I was in a dream, oh, it seemed that a hundred birds- I heard. The ancient tree seemed to be thousands of years old, twisting gnarled branches were covered in moss; it was humbling and beautiful to behold. branches grew upwards and stretched wide across. Some branches fell into the ground then grew again, it was battle scarred from many a storm; and gave me such strength I said a prayer, amen, I lay beneath for hours and felt so warm. There was a peace within me that was uplifting, if this old oak tree can survive the years; then, why can I not send my pain and grief drifting, so, beneath this tree I let go of tears. _______________________ March 2, 2020 Added after contest judged March 14/20- Poetry/Rhyme/I Found Peace and Beauty Copyright Protected, ID 20-1232-758-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, GIF With Your Best Anything sponsor, William Kekaula First Place

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Date: 3/16/2020 9:19:00 PM
Dear Heart, congratulations on your awesome win with this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2020 12:36:00 PM
Eve, thank you for the congratulations and for the compliment on my poem _Constance
Date: 3/14/2020 3:55:00 PM
Warmingly said, Constance, for it engages the readers from the start, exposing them richly through well-placed words, --this is truly worthy to be 1st place, my thanks for your participation, Aloha, William
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Date: 3/14/2020 8:22:00 PM
William thank you for another inspirational contest and for my great placement, honored _Constance
Date: 3/3/2020 11:29:00 AM
Outstanding , Constance. I also saw your completed work on the clown poem but could not get my comment to go through for some reason. I like you ended the clown poem with the depths of your sorrow showing in your eyes. In THIS poem, I love the analogy of the tree to your own pain and struggles. My entry for this contest is just a short silly one about the fish!! You really took this contest to a deep level.
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Date: 3/3/2020 6:16:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment on both poems, I was having difficulty today also on PS, it took me three tries to get this poem posted _Constance

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