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I Found Contentment In Your Arms

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I am perfectly content lying in your arms The look in your eyes has been revealed Tender affection I'm always able to glean Love's reflection has never been concealed My heart was once fragile and broken but no longer is it blemished with fears It was chipped like a delicate porcelain cup but you mended it when you dried my tears I'm not a flawless diamond or a lustrous pearl I've dulled from heartache, wounded long ago but when held within the strength of your arms I feel as though I've been polished until I glow When we are together, lying side by side, bare fleshed, our bodies yearning and heated your touch becomes a spark, a burning flame ignited when the words, "I love you," are repeated We will forever be committed to our spoken vows Your gentle warmth blooms my budding flower Our love is incarnate, not a mere fantasy Beside you I will linger, hour after hour Night has fallen. I'll light the scented candles climb back into bed where beside you I'll sigh, "Hold me in your arms until break of dawn. This love we share, I could never deny." ~ September 18th, 2017 ~ Hold me in your arms contest Hosted by: Julie Rodeheaver

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Date: 9/19/2017 12:43:00 PM
congrats Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/4/2017 8:17:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/19/2017 10:58:00 AM
Lin, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this amazing write and I love your image too!
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Date: 9/19/2017 12:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Constance. It's almost as much fun to find just the right painting or photo to accompany the poem as it is to write it.
Date: 9/19/2017 6:30:00 AM
Congrats Lin on your BIG win--a lovely, sweet poem!
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Date: 9/19/2017 12:01:00 PM
Thanks very much, Vijay.
Date: 9/19/2017 1:35:00 AM
A great win, Lin! Lovely poem
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Date: 9/19/2017 12:00:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Budgie. ;-)
Date: 9/18/2017 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Lin on your win. A lovely love poem.
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Date: 9/19/2017 12:00:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Subimal.
Date: 9/18/2017 11:08:00 PM
Congratulations Lin on your win. Full of heartfelt passion and emotion.
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/19/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thanks for such wonderful thoughts, Michael.
Date: 9/18/2017 9:34:00 PM
A sensuous write! Well done and congrats, LIN!
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Date: 9/19/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Kim.
Date: 9/18/2017 8:04:00 PM
Wonderful writing Lin, uberly romantic a love all desire to attain, but few find this kind of pure love. A winner in my eyes!
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Date: 9/19/2017 11:59:00 AM
Thanks for the great comments, John. They're "uberly" delightful. ;-)
Date: 9/18/2017 12:16:00 PM
This is so nice Lin. A beautiful, comforting poem. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:27:00 PM
Thanks for the comments and well wishes, Heidi.
Date: 9/18/2017 12:06:00 PM
Just beautiful Lin, the best things in life are free. Good Luck
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:27:00 PM
That's true, Mike. Thanks so much.
Date: 9/18/2017 11:56:00 AM
oh so beautiful and romantic Lin I could never write anything as beautiful! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2017 12:23:00 PM
Thank you, and yes you could. You are a multi-talented poet so stop selling yourself short. I really appreciate you for all of your encouraging comments, Jan.
Date: 9/18/2017 11:18:00 AM
Such a lovely warmth to cling to, so very well told Lin...
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thanks ever so much, Charlie.
Date: 9/18/2017 10:42:00 AM
A love to behold....a really beautiful poem Lin
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Date: 9/18/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tim.

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