I Fell For Fall

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Fall captured my blithe heart Such parting songs on pretty pathways, with colors in my eyes Crisp days of cool circumstance and fires at flickering evening Final flowers stain the grass with hues Filled with goodbye blues, the sun's retreating.

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Laura Leiser

Date: 8/8/2023 1:48:00 PM

You captured the charm of autumn so beautifully with your poetic words, Evelyn! Lovely! :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/8/2023 7:11:00 PM

I appreciate your warm remarks very much, Laura. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/7/2023 2:42:00 PM

absolutly delightful, evelyn thanks a lot for the pleasure of reading this

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/7/2023 6:59:00 PM

Quite welcome. Thank you for your kind expressions. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/7/2023 11:04:00 AM

- You always create colors with your words, Evelyn even with goodbye blues ...a gem :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/7/2023 6:57:00 PM

Thank you so much for the compliments, my friend. <3 hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/7/2023 5:52:00 AM

Such parting songs on pretty pathways, with colors in my eyes--beautifully described, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/7/2023 10:19:00 AM

Your words bring joy. Thank you, Vijay.