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I feel Spring hesitantly, delicately, leaving subtle telltale fingerprints on dripping icicles. Releasing sweet scents on the wings of a breeze Her breath fills my lungs with fresh air. I feel Spring playfully, tauntingly, ever so softly blowing sensually upon my neck, toying with me. The sky changes color, hosting hues of differing blues as the melting snowflakes morph into streams. I feel Spring's presence becoming motherly, giving birth to the chirp of a cricket's forlorn trill. Songbirds return to their favorite perch, and buds begin to shadow trees in green stubble, defying Winter's clean-shaven look. I feel Spring brazenly summoning showers to enhance Her breathtaking beauty. Colors of the rainbow decorate a plethora of flowers, the birds build nests, the earth renews, and Spring strips away all signs of Winter's white.

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Date: 5/2/2018 5:41:00 PM
Beautiful free verse Emile. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Lainie
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Date: 5/2/2018 7:02:00 PM
Thanks ever so much Elaine, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2018 11:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem. Well done.
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate you visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/1/2018 9:50:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Emile.
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Date: 5/2/2018 9:15:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you visits my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/23/2018 2:19:00 PM
- Yes, it's breathtaking beautiful Emile :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/23/2018 3:33:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, your support is always appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/23/2018 12:10:00 PM
Lovely poem, Emile. Lovely imagery.
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Date: 4/23/2018 3:33:00 PM
Thanks Line, your support is always appreciated my friend, Emile.

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