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contest I Dream Poetry...sponsor Ink Empress

I dreamt a dreamer's dream of illusion where the sky fell into the sea and left a smokey red thread on the grave of the horizon where stars bubbled in the ocean then shot up to the never-reaches carrying my vision with them into a vast darkness leaving me blind facing a new universe where everything explodes to leave remnants of yesterday drifting in space, another galaxy of fluidity spilling across infinity that man believed he owned before he blew up the sky and sent it into the sea now filled with tears forming waves, rushing to nowhere for the land like the horizon...is gone

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Date: 9/12/2023 12:08:00 PM
Frederic, dear friend, dear poet, your poetic pen is as profound as it is beautiful. Your potent artistry inspires both awe and agony. A soulful aching exquisite gem.. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Ink's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/12/2023 2:17:00 PM
thank you dear friend, dear poet... profound is what I was reaching for
Date: 9/12/2023 11:52:00 AM
- Feels like a restless dream … and you want to wake up quickly - Congratulations on your win, Frederic - hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/12/2023 2:18:00 PM
yes my poetic friend describing an ending will get you to wake up
Date: 9/12/2023 5:29:00 AM
This is such a heartfelt and creative write! The way you describe things is so profound and soul hitting. Especially that opening is so good! Thank you for sharing your dream. CONGRATULATIONS
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/12/2023 2:18:00 PM
thank you for your kindness
Date: 9/10/2023 9:02:00 AM
This to me is such a very fine poem of beautifully woven imagination. Showing the loss of everything makes one wonder, shall such ever come to be? A gem my friend and for me a fav too. God bless you..
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/12/2023 2:19:00 PM
thank you, Robert, may God bless you
Date: 9/9/2023 10:02:00 AM
I think we'd all like to live in a universe where nothing explodes. As for me, I believe that particular dream is sure to become reality
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/12/2023 2:20:00 PM
we may have been here before and already done it

Book: Shattered Sighs