Poet Destroyer A Poet Free verse

I Dream

~ I DREAM a DREAM ~

I dream a dream so placid~~
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A commitment that burns every morning brink
I feel the pain as I slip into my shoes of confident
Every day I wonder how much more can I take?
I want to fall right back to sleep, knowing I'm still in deep
Another day facing the sun, holding onto feelings overdone
I taste the acid, I feel the corrosive results
A reaction eating my heart away with fault
My expressions are dissolving as I carry a 100 pound bag of salt.


I dream a dream of addiction~~
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By morning dawn I gain control of my world
Watch, as my eagle eye's hide under my new disguise
My withdrawals ride high into the sky
I'm under an ultimate dependent narcotic feel
My drugs of the low - self image sits under garbage waste
Reacting with chills, vengeance- my only pill
Acting on my addiction, I deprive my insecurities with restriction
Power in every hit, a strong substance I withhold every dope hour


I dream a dream of adultery~~
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Every day the sun rises, I share a cup of coffee for three
Fighting the feeling that flows towards another man
My head is sweating, my emotions are distracting and upsetting
This river boat got wet, the day you introduced me to the Internet
In my subconscious mind you are here and then you disappear
My sexual desires I self-sabotage when you become him
My love that's the only way my body will let you in
A mess brought by your cheating days
Now the interest has gone away
Betrayed by you, neglecting me
Don't ever trust, or believe what you see.

by:)

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 11:01 PM caught in a trap

Laura Breidenthal September 9, 2013 at 5:39 AM These poetic thoughts are relate-able. . You describe your feelings so eloquently and creatively. I think this is the reason I admire your work so much. Your words are filled with passion and pain . Always, Laura

Colleen Bono June 1, 2013 at 10:40 PM No wonder you have so many friends on the soup.you can pick any of your poems and it doesnt disappoint.

Len Gasun May 15, 2013 at 10:18 AM Hi, my loving sis Linda!I hope you're alright and at the zenith of good health and everything. I'm stopping by to say belated heartfelt congratulations on your awesome win here and this outstanding write of yours. I'm so glad to read it again and see it in the winners list. Can't stop thanking you for your marvelous writes! Good night to you and God bless my dearest sis! love always & 4ever, Leonora

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 14, 2013 at 2:56 AM Very deeply penned. Big Congrats to you on your win. AO

Colleen Bono May 12, 2013 at 9:59 PM please tell me the chances of both of us placing 9th in the dream contest?hope you had a great mothers day.don't work to hard.

Abdul Malik Mandani May 12, 2013 at 6:57 PM Self revealing! Dreams are the projection of our fear, fantasy and unfulfilled wishes. What's true here? I like it.

Tim Ryerson May 12, 2013 at 6:55 PM I woulda put this baby at the top of the list...Stunning and compelling stuff...Love the addiction verse...Hope you had a wonderful Mother's Day...I came home from work and immediately crashed on the couch (bummer) Just got thru talking to mom though...Very nice conversation - Tim

Donna Jones May 12, 2013 at 6:28 PM I feel a poem written from hurt...and pain....very nice though...you are tops.....congratulations

Nathan D. May 12, 2013 at 6:13 PM nice one babe

Len Gasun March 8, 2013 at 11:05 AM Stopping by once again to say Hi and good night my beloved sis! Greeting you also a Happy happy Women's Day! Leaving you my big sweetest hugs, kisses and smiles. Thanks for everything and God bless you and your love ones always! Always missing you, ur #1 fan Leo

Harry Horsman January 2, 2013 at 12:28 AM ARE YOU BACK YET? first time here, another example of your amazing poetry,, and i especially like this, because you have lowered your shield, and i just love the girl that appears...

Bruce Chhetri August 30, 2011 at 3:56 AM its awesome

Dinda Minardi August 23, 2011 at 10:21 AM I like the first dream the most! But all of them really great, you packed them wonderfully, P.D. I'm glad I read this poem tonight. :)

Matt Daniels July 23, 2011 at 10:46 PM This...Is amazing. Great, great poem. Definitely the best I've read. Great depth.

Jack Ross Jr. July 20, 2011 at 11:51 AM Wow, sensous, racy, tantalizing.........Wonderful write! No wonder you call yourself the destroyer, lol. Thank you much for you gracious and kind comments on Pushed too hard....so much appreciated......with all my best wishes for you sweet Lady..........Old Jack

Jl Sadberry July 14, 2011 at 2:21 PM === Smile, *^_^* “Sooo, That's My Com Unto You My Dear *^_^* Place Its Hearts Sincerity, Into Your Beauties Coffee.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *

Jl Sadberry July 14, 2011 at 2:13 PM === Smile, *^_^* “I Thought That I Would Try to Make Your Beauty Smile *^_^* Since I Have Always Thought Sooo Warmly & Highly of Your Lovely Light, My Dear = Not Many Days Ever Pass By If All Wherein, Your Precious Heart Does Not Enter My Thoughts &, Just Sooo Your Beauty Knows == You Are A Treasure to Be Treasured *^_^* A Unique Jewel of Lifes Nile Glimmering & Shimmering & Shining Sooo Very Bright Amid The Radiant Glittering of Glow In Such *^_^* Pure Beauty.” === Cont}

Jl Sadberry July 14, 2011 at 1:57 PM Smile, *^_^* “You Know, Sometimes This Internet Can Be Like A Slow Play Slay *^_^* Kind of Like Torture *^_#* Especially When Ones Thoughts Are Going A Thousand Miles A Minute With A Tank of Loving Words That Wish to Escape Before Rear Ending Another Box Car to Be Strewn About The Lost Upon Tracks of What Was It I Wanting Say *^_^* My Precious, Sweeet Beautiful LeeAnn.” === Cont}

Judy Ball July 11, 2011 at 2:41 PM This is really excellent. The acid of resentment that burns within someone who has feelings of self pity for one reason or another and blaming all one's problems on someone else rather than placing them where they belong. Good job here, God Bless, JB

Brashard Bursey July 1, 2011 at 9:21 PM Nice poem, Ms. Destroyer. Very good poem.

Gary Fields June 21, 2011 at 5:44 AM Sorry Ms. Destroyer I didn't know which is which! In all of my candor, I could have made the switch. I knew the title was suspicious, and your writing is to such a degree, that I could only assume and hope that it wil not be my doom for you are the DESTORYERX no matter what the sex.. that I wil not be next, I have never seen any woman express herself quite that! Your frind in the pen/to the end! Gary Fields and to think..I almos hit on you in one of my comments'. with much love all over,

Joseph Osita June 11, 2011 at 7:18 AM This is an excellent sculpture of words that masturbate conscience.I enjoyed reading the poem.huggs*

James Foulk June 9, 2011 at 10:27 AM dreams, what would we do while sleeping, if not for the dreams. a great piece of creative poetry. thank you for reading and commenting on Little Blue Eyes, i will have another of him tomorrow, since it is his first Birthday.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair June 9, 2011 at 4:05 AM dreams of this and dreams of that..i would like to wish u sweet dreams...of love and joy and hope

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