I DREAM

As my body shakes violently,
                      In the midst of sound sleep;
                                 Naked and alone 
                         Lying on the cold concrete...
                        This reality of my nightmare, 
                                          I DREAM...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Allison Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 2:21 AM
Thanks for your reply Terry - you may not be a paying member but You could always leave 'notes' by posting a comment . I have often seen other people do that xx hugs jan xx
Cunningham  Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 4:48 PM
Suddenly it wouldn't let me cap the validation code. It's a beautifully sad story. It's to bad after all that writing.
Allison Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 3:55 PM
the imagery gave me chills Terry made me think of a mortuary slab:-( hugs jan xx
Cunningham  Avatar
June 29, 2025 at 7:04 PM
Unfortunately I was very alive and very young. I'm not member so I couldn't leave the details to the poem. Thank you for reading and commenting
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