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I DREAM

As my body shakes violently, In the midst of sound sleep; Naked and alone Lying on the cold concrete... This reality of my nightmare, I DREAM...

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/30/2025 2:21:00 AM

Thanks for your reply Terry - you may not be a paying member but You could always leave 'notes' by posting a comment . I have often seen other people do that xx hugs jan xx

Terry Cunningham
Date: 6/30/2025 4:48:00 PM

Suddenly it wouldn't let me cap the validation code. It's a beautifully sad story. It's to bad after all that writing.

Tom Woody

Date: 6/29/2025 5:24:00 PM

In this case dreams are better than reality. Unless they become nightmares.

Terry Cunningham
Date: 6/30/2025 4:44:00 PM

I want to thank you from my heart for not only reading but taking the time to comment Angers Fate

Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2025 3:55:00 PM

the imagery gave me chills Terry made me think of a mortuary slab:-( hugs jan xx

Terry Cunningham
Date: 6/29/2025 7:04:00 PM

Unfortunately I was very alive and very young. I'm not member so I couldn't leave the details to the poem. Thank you for reading and commenting