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Written on September 6, 2023

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I Dream

When echoes of nocturnal ricochet over the nights, Ebony and stardust fill my heart, Erasing the sun’s gaze, inspiring the moon to blaze With its tempting song, singing all night long – I remember the dreams that bring rhythm to my feelings, Tempt me to believe, even though I can’t quite see The reality is… struggles and pains, difficulties Gain impetus, waking the pines, the golden birch, In hues of longing, they sigh, breathing hope Through the moments, through the life, like an alibi A knowing that this is the day when love is blowing Through the skies, winds alive with insight – Braving every distant thunder, even the lightening Can’t survive the delight, the stirring of a sight far more alive, Beautiful as the truth, amusing the night with its vision, Focusing in on the secret treasure, the bold flames Success in faded feelings, inspirations awakening the embrace Of promises left to breathe… This dream, in flavors of wonder and peace, Melodies rich and brave, focused on feeling – gentling Darkness, rousing the sensitivity of a light falling soft On the heart… imagining the source of all hope, The One who reminds my heart, my soul, each dream Is alive like the seed He planted inside of me, A seed who believes… and you see, He nourishes the seed With grace, kindness, mercy – a inkling of what it means To love without conditions, love with the conviction That love is openhanded, like the dream who survives The darkness of night, the struggle with fear, the reasons… So many reasons to doubt, yet – the dream lives And on and on we continue, dreaming like sleep can never keep us From thinking of this reason for believing – just believe And, in time, if the dream doesn’t fade, it will become a reality, The makings of a history… Dream on… believe, and never leave this dream in the dust, Where it might fade into the shadows of the past Dream on… believe, and hearts will soon be fulfilled!
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Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 7:13 PM
Always lovely, Gina! Congratulations on POTD!
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 2:57 AM
Dear talented poetess, your way with writing is so heartfelt and moving and i love the way you paint imagery and write in such a captivating manner with your exquisite rhythm of wordplay. You are truly a gifted poet. And every line is articulate in such finesse. Reminding us all to believe. Magical write .Thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS
One Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 8:49 AM
This is an epic poem... you have written a poem that you can take so much from it... the emotions are so vivid in this and love the mellow nature of it... each stanza has imagery and words that many people and poets will relate to... wonderful poetry and I can see why this one got POTD...
Cunningham Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Belated congratulations to you Gina on the honour of POTD. Tom
Sharma  Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 7:29 PM
Heartiest congratulations on the well-deserved POTD dear, as I said, I loveee this one so much :)
Lane Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:36 PM
Congratulations on your potd, Gina. Sorry I’m late with commenting.
Nicole Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:32 PM
You create moments beyond dreamland, my sweet friend. This holds hope, happiness and the reality of His love. Your words are so beautiful and uplifting, and my heart is smiling. Congratulations Regina, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Hawkins Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 5:42 PM
Congratulations, Regin, on your well-deserved POtD win. Beautiful poetry, exquisite. Wow! Take care, Shirley.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:55 PM
A poet is a believer.. a dreamer.. a master of the word and a creator of many a world.. dear poetess, with a genuine artistry you have created a whole world to reach we have to follow your words, believe your thoughts and have faith in your dream.. Congratulations, Regina on your POTD honour ! An immense pleasure to read ! God bless you. Best regards.
Chircop Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on POTD.Such a beautiful poem.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations, Gina, on POTD of your breathtakingly uplifting poem! Your words of faith and love resonate and inspire. Love ~
One Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:02 PM
Congratulation on POTD my friend.
McBride  Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on POTD, love it : )
Baker Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 8:34 AM
A truly gifted poet and a dream that caresses us in God's unconditional Love. Congratulations on your POTD honor, Gina. Your words will resonate with many. God bless and keep you, my friend. Bill
Mcconnell Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 8:26 AM
Such a lovely piece Gina, so beautifully penned with lovely wording and imagery too. Congrats on the POTD, well done! Gordon
Poet Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Such a truly beautiful and lovely poem, Gina. Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD
M  Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations on POTD Regina….well done…..Debx
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Love your last line, "Dream on… believe, and hearts will soon be fulfilled!" Have a blessed/great day with your win....................
Gentile Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:55 AM
Gina, congratulations on a beautiful POTD!!! Enjoy your day!!
Fowler Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Uplifting imagery dear Gina. Beauty in each line. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 5:58 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful POTD. Perfect poem.
La France Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 5:24 AM
Gina, a truly beautiful poem and congratulations on your deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor !
Kaufman Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 5:08 AM
HI Regina, A hearty congratulations on this lovely spiritual poem, POTD.. I think "life is but a dream" and you captured so well here. Enjoyed immensely.
Pandit Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 4:33 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Gina. What a beautiful exploration of dream! Enjoy your special day today.
Lindley Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 4:22 AM
My friend, Congratulations for this very, very beautiful POTD. I so enjoyed reading your new creation. A gem and A fav.... God bless you...
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