I Don't Think You'll Miss Me

It’s like they say in the words,
of that sad old country song.
Honey, you know I love you, 
but I must be moving on.

Not sure which of us is right,
or which one of us is wrong.
But somehow, I don’t think that, 
you will miss me when I’m gone. 

Can’t see beyond tomorrow,
nothing left for me to gain.
I’m running on a treadmill,
each step I take is the same.

I can’t say I don’t love you,
because that would be a lie.
It’s too late to start over,
I’m too tired to even try.

I’m tired of always walking,
on the sharp edge of the knife.
I’m going to walk away,
to give you a better life.

Seems that all we ever do,
is fight from twilight to dawn.
So darling, that’s why I don’t,
think you’ll miss me when I’m gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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February 9, 2024 at 5:10 AM
Absolutely Brilliant Brother Jerry!! Beautifully written….and l know its fiction as l have read your words of love for your wife who you obviously adore!! Sister Debx
Wolf Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 6:51 PM
Boy, does this ever resonate with me. Well-'documented,' me thinks. ~ Been there, man. ~ Gershon
Baker Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 6:37 PM
A lot more senior make that choice in today's world. Not the same kind of commitment to the marriage these days. People get married for the wrong reasons more often now. Never having been divorce seems to be in the minority in today's world. Your poem had a nice rhythm to it, Jerry. Good rhyme poetry, my friend. Bill
One Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 12:00 PM
Man.... tell me about it.. many have gone through this.. nicely expressed..
Brotherton Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 6:14 PM
Thanks Silent One. This was originally a song lyric that I shortened.
Rolland Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 10:20 PM
love can be "exhausting" in one way, this is a touching poem, courage to you poet
Brotherton Avatar
February 7, 2024 at 6:12 PM
Thank you, Yann. I appreciate your comment.
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