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I Died As a Child

I died as a child, or so I suspect, and my child-soul flew to the very sweetest heaven where all children play joyfully with the child of God, who loves us as He did on earth.... When I came to this life so many years ago, Jesus was still my best friend, my nightly prayers more like a conversation: "How was your day? Mine was o.k., I played and played...." But my prayer to His Father was simple and constant: O Lord, let me live till my next birthday, or Christmas, if that comes sooner. Then-- then you can take me Lord-- just let me open my presents and bathe in a child's joy.... As a child, I never knew a child who died, and I never, ever told anyone about my secret, my secret prayer. And never was I afraid of dying-- after all, how could I be, when all it meant was going home to see again my best and most beloved friend.... (posted 1/30/15)

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Date: 7/4/2016 2:28:00 PM
Your poem reflects the innocence and simplicity of a child's faith. We adults make it more difficult. Congrats!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 7/5/2016 8:55:00 AM
Thank you Kim-- I have long suspected that children may be closer to God because they have spent less time 'away' from the 'other world', which we tend to 'forget' more and more as we put down roots in this world of flesh and blood. And because kids have souls, they bring their character/personality with them at birth--please see my poem 'The Bravest Boy'.
Date: 12/2/2015 11:55:00 PM
Len, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:01:00 PM
Wonderful write Ien! Congrats on superb win!!
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations Len.
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Date: 12/2/2015 9:41:00 AM
Congrats on your win and thank you for being a part of my contest-lu *smiles*
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Date: 9/6/2015 2:42:00 AM
Ien congrats ! Lovely reading about a child waiting for gifts before dying!
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Date: 9/5/2015 12:36:00 PM
len carber, Congrats on your win... LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/4/2015 5:05:00 PM
This gives me the shivers because it really touched a part of me... losing your best friend, that beautiful child within is a revolutionary tragedy. I admired the section with the conversations you had with Christ. So beautiful and simple. Always, Laura
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Date: 9/4/2015 12:02:00 PM
Ahhh...the priorities of every wonderful child, gifts, God and unpretentious geniality. This poem is simply awesome in it's spiritual innocence and excitement for life and the Beyond Ien. Super poem! J.A.B.
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Date: 9/4/2015 3:38:00 AM
Congrats once again on yet another win with this amazing write Ien!
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Ien! Quite an emotive pen!
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:42:00 AM
awesome win...SKAT
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Date: 2/7/2015 9:44:00 PM
this is a sad and unique poem on the perspective of what I perceive to be an abused child. Or possibly it was simply a child who died of a disease and was not afraid to die because he would return to his spirit home. Very nice.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/8/2015 12:47:00 PM
Not an abused child, Andrea-- i had a severe speech defect which took many years of therapy to rectify, and so I did not have any friends as a very young 'un. But I was not lonely, because I had a sense of having a very great friend-- a child's fantasy? Perhaps....
Date: 1/31/2015 3:14:00 PM
Intriguing poem, Len, with such an interesting perspective! I enjoyed it!
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