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I didn't realise bitesize

I walked on air Correlations of care Telling me, I'm worthy of Love, love, love, love Just for a moment I see Everything is ok, ok about me

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Robert Sidwell

Date: 3/29/2024 11:15:00 AM

Positivity works! Excellently written! I loved that you had a line with just the words “love”. Honestly felt a level happier just for reading this :-)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/29/2024 11:30:00 AM

What a wonderful comment! Thank you Robert - happy you levelled up on happiness :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/27/2024 4:31:00 AM

Congratulations, DD! I loved how your poem is a profound exploration of self-worth and acceptance, beautifully encapsulating the fleeting moments of clarity and reassurance. The simplicity of your words carries immense depth, resonating with readers on a deeply personal level. Your victory in the poetry contest is well-deserved, showcasing your talent and insight. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/27/2024 4:19:00 PM

Ahh it would be to hold onto these feelings, easy to get knocked off my perch though :) thank you for your kind words, appreciated

Karen Jones

Date: 3/26/2024 1:57:00 PM

A great job and congratulations on your win!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/26/2024 2:22:00 PM

Thank you Karen, appreciated

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/23/2024 6:30:00 AM

Indeed it’s these little correlations of care, that help elevate our spirits in our moments of doubt Dilly, a rather uplifting little bite size stanza, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/23/2024 9:44:00 AM

Thank you David, it's funny to capture my moments of positivity as well as the self doubt. I'm given so much more fuel for positive thinking it's a shame I let myself get derailed like I do. Thank for the comment

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/23/2024 12:37:00 AM

You receive enough Love, you will walk on air! Nothing could be truer. A factual bite sized realization. Well done. :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/23/2024 9:41:00 AM

Thank you Wen, this was propelled into being by two glasses of wine as well as some nice words :)