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I Come Here

I come here to talk Make a point to arrive particularly early So I can soak in that calming atmosphere The soothing music is peaceful Absorb it all with each deep breath I close my eyes to unwind Clear my head Quiet my heart Dissolve the knots and anxieties Try to reach a zen like state Know that I am where I must be I come here to talk But really I come here to find The best of myself AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted n May 29, 2018 for CONTEST 445 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 6/1/2018 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Line!
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Date: 6/1/2018 11:58:00 AM
Most appreciated, Besma.
Date: 6/1/2018 6:55:00 AM
"I come here to find the best of myself"! A beautiful culmination for your piece of art! To unleash the best of oneself is the craving of every beautiful soul. I like your write Line. Shine and remain blessed.
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Date: 6/1/2018 11:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Besma.
Date: 5/31/2018 8:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. A soothing read.
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Date: 5/31/2018 9:23:00 PM
Thanks, Susan, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 5/31/2018 5:07:00 PM
I enjoyed the peacefulness of the poem, Line, congrats on your win. John
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Date: 5/31/2018 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, John. I'm glad my intent came through.
Date: 5/31/2018 4:55:00 PM
Back with congratulations, Line! :) gw
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Date: 5/31/2018 5:32:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/31/2018 4:28:00 PM
Congrats!!
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Date: 5/31/2018 5:32:00 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 5/31/2018 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Line. Just love it when you get to that real peaceful state within yourself Tom.
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Date: 5/31/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thank you sio much, Tom, for your lovely visit and comment.
Date: 5/31/2018 3:32:00 PM
As do we all. Congrats.
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Date: 5/31/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Dale. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/30/2018 10:06:00 PM
Like it a lot!... In a bit of a jocular sense: Much, MUCH better than Lamaze! --Peace! ~ gershon
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Date: 5/31/2018 8:25:00 AM
As long as you like it, Gershon. LOL
Date: 5/30/2018 4:49:00 AM
Very soothing write! Taking care of yourself!
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Date: 5/30/2018 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kim.
Date: 5/29/2018 11:31:00 PM
Very well penned, Line. "I come here to find, the best of myself".. very nicely said.
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Date: 5/30/2018 8:33:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Subimal.

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