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I Chose To Run

I chose to run, but had I stayed My life would have been so run-of-the-mill, But I am pleased my mind was not swayed That I chose my own path and following it still. My life would have been so run-of-the-mill Precisely as anyone might have predicted That I chose my own path, following it still, Means I have lived free, never been conflicted. Precisely as anyone might have predicted Who knew me when can say I broke the mold, Means I have lived free, never been conflicted, I have no reason to regret it, now that I’m old. Who knew me when can say I broke the mold Adventuresome, I sought the exciting path, I have no reason to regret it now that I’m old, Never having given thought to the aftermath. Adventuresome, I sought the exciting path Had I not, I would have missed life’s potential Never having given thought to the aftermath, I lived life focusing on the important existential. Had I not, I would have missed life’s potential But I am pleased my mind was not swayed, I lived life focusing on the important existential I chose to run, . . . but had I stayed?
SECOND PLACE WINNER Written November 2, 2022 Submitted to "I Chose to Run, But Had I Stayed..." Poetry Contest Sponsored by Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Date: 11/26/2022 4:46:00 AM
"Who knew me when can say I broke the mold Adventuresome, I sought the exciting path" - Great! I rememember Robert Frost. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/26/2022 9:50:00 AM
Yes, Chris, there are a few hints of Frost in this poem, I suppose.
Date: 11/3/2022 7:38:00 AM
An authentic life, brave and unapologetic. Beautifully penned, Milt ~ enjoyed the poem
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/3/2022 8:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Unseeking Seeker. And that's the truth!!!
Date: 11/2/2022 2:50:00 PM
sounds like you took the road not traveled by most of us. good one..
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/2/2022 8:31:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Nancy. I'd like to think so.
Date: 11/2/2022 2:20:00 PM
I really liked this whole poem but especially this part "Adventuresome, I sought the exciting path, I have no reason to regret it now that I’m old," Sassy!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/2/2022 8:31:00 PM
Caren, thanks so much. It makes my heart feel good that you really liked this poem.

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