I Can'T Stop the Rain But I Can Weather It Out

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~I Can't Stop The Rain,But I Can Weather It Out~ (pantoum) Everyday I always plea for God's grace He helps me thru problems of any kind Because I only rely in His mighty power God helps me through sunshine and rain He helps me thru problems of any kind With him there no really high walls He helps me through sunshine and rain And He brings in my life just fresh air With Him there not really high walls He steps in and stops the ocean's swell And He brings in my life just fresh air And with Him my soul can't turn yellow He steps in and stops the ocean's swell Because I only rely in His Mighty power And with Him my soul can't turn yellow Everyday I always plea for God's grace. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January,1,2015

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Perry Mcdaid

Date: 1/1/2015 6:52:00 PM

Nice arrangement, though you mixed the spelling of "through" and "thru". A pantoum is a beastie to maaster. You did really well. With your attitude the new year promises huge rewards

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/1/2015 8:03:00 PM

Hello Perry! Thank you so much for dropping by on me again and for hour very kind comments. So much appreciate it and you, my very dear friend.i wish you a most lovely day! Take good care now! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/1/2015 2:32:00 PM

While many times in life, we may have to accept things we cannot change, that doesn't mean that we can't do anything about it. It's also about figuring out how to handle situations that we cannot change. That's when we have a choice of deciding how to weather the storm. Brilliant, powerful, inspirational piece, Dorian! Wishing you a happy and fulfilling 2015! Pandita.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/1/2015 8:10:00 PM

Hi Pandita! Thank you very much for your very wonderful visit and comments. I do really appreciate a lot my very dear friend. I wish you a very Prosperous and Happy New Year! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.