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I Can'T Believe You!

I can't believe you would hurt me this much, i still want to be with you, no matter what anyoe says, i can't get over you, and i don't want to. even though you said some awful things about me. which really hurt/hurts. i never thought we would end we had three wonderful years together and i cherished every moment i had with you. now you have someone new and she's younger than me and you. you said i shouldn't drop out, that you wouldn't date me if i did, you said that you would help me through everything, you said you loved me! i stayed in school for you and noone else! i fought for you, i got into fights with my mom for you. you were my first at everything we did. i still love you, and always will. my mom says i should move on. but she is wrong! me and you were meant to be, forever and always. (you said)!

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Date: 11/12/2009 12:11:00 PM
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Date: 11/11/2009 4:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sarah. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2009 4:33:00 PM
It's always good to vent send him a copy maybe you'll get through
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Date: 11/10/2009 12:24:00 PM
that is very powerful but think about the pain he has put u through... u shouldnt deal with that when there are more people that are actually likeing u everyday they see u... but they know that u will never like them. and yes i know a few people at your school
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Date: 11/10/2009 11:28:00 AM
very powerful writing. I could feel what you had to go through in this writting, I cant put this all in words of how powerful this writting is to me... good job
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