I Can'T Believe You!

I can't believe you would hurt me this much, i still want to be with you, no matter what 
anyoe says, i can't get over you, and i don't want to.  even though you said some awful 
things about me.  which really hurt/hurts.  i never thought we would end we had three 
wonderful years together and i cherished every moment i had with you.  now you have 
someone new and she's younger than me and you.  you said i shouldn't drop out, that you 
wouldn't date me if i did, you said that you would help me through everything, you said you 
loved me!  i stayed in school for you and noone else!  i fought for you, i got into fights with 
my mom for you.  you were my first at everything we did.  i still love you, and always will.  
my mom says i should move on. but she is wrong!  me and you were meant to be, forever 
and always.  (you said)!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/12/2009 12:11:00 PM
KOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 11/11/2009 4:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sarah. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2009 4:33:00 PM
It's always good to vent send him a copy maybe you'll get through
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Date: 11/10/2009 12:24:00 PM
that is very powerful but think about the pain he has put u through... u shouldnt deal with that when there are more people that are actually likeing u everyday they see u... but they know that u will never like them. and yes i know a few people at your school
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Date: 11/10/2009 11:28:00 AM
very powerful writing. I could feel what you had to go through in this writting, I cant put this all in words of how powerful this writting is to me... good job
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