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I Can'T Believe That You'Re Here

I can't believe that you're here! When I think about the past and I reflect on all that's happened I have to say, dark's turned to grey those lonely days no longer matter. Mounds of stones, been overturned this bodies weak from all the burden. But from weakness, there comes strength love start's to heal, a heart that's hurtin' Bridge Lonely days, empty nights without love I can't bear to walk down that road again Can't turn back, I'm on the right track to find the love I've lacked Chorus I can't believe that you're here! I want to believe it! I've always needed you here! I see you believe it! I'm going to get down on my knees and thank God for all his patience thank him for hearing all my pleas and for relieving my frustrations. Go to Bridge Then Chorus repeat twice fade John Derek Hamilton September 02,2016

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Date: 9/7/2016 9:46:00 AM
Ah! If wishes would come true, I would be singing this:) thanks for igniting that hope:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/7/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thanks Jo, and for millions of others still waiting for love, but one day, it will come, and all will sing this! Thanks again!
Date: 9/3/2016 11:13:00 AM
Dear John! love this, you are so gifted and every poem I read of yours I am never surprised it is written by you :)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/3/2016 12:22:00 PM
thanks Laura, you are so kind, you should try writing a song it's actually easier than poetry I think anyway!
Date: 9/2/2016 11:01:00 PM
Really positive write John. I'm not really looking anymore. I've always been told when one looks for love he never finds it but when he quits, love will find him. Really enjoyed the read and the thought. Great write.
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/3/2016 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Daniel you're probably right, thanks for the positive feedback.

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