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I Believe In Miracles

In the midst of life, the music stopped I came close to death, my vitals dropped There were no reasons anymore Answers sought were behind a closed door Then, in beautiful moments things changed Thirsty for life, thoughts rearranged Surprised by the gift of more time now I would make the best of everything somehow Melancholy takes us where we let it be I don’t look back to wonder, but ahead to see All that remains to be found to celebrate I still believe in miracles and still believe in fate Heidi Sands 5/16/18 Placed 5th in a poem about death poetry contest. Words required: Melancholy, beautiful, thirsty, music Theme – In the midst of life

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Date: 5/20/2018 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations, Heidi on your well deserved win. "All that remains to be found to celebrate" great line, revealing.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/20/2018 6:09:00 AM
Thank you Subimal. I appreciate your comment on this :)
Date: 5/19/2018 10:51:00 PM
Heidi, congratulations on your win in my contest with this great write, well done ~
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/20/2018 6:09:00 AM
Thank you BW. I appreciate the opportunity and the placement :)
Date: 5/19/2018 12:08:00 PM
I'm with you on this. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed. Well done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/19/2018 12:24:00 PM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 5/18/2018 6:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 6:35:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 5/18/2018 3:53:00 PM
Amazing poem, Heidi! Congratulations on your win!*Hugs*
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 4:04:00 PM
Thank you Edward ! :)
Date: 5/18/2018 2:44:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 5/18/2018 12:34:00 PM
- A poem about death represent the emotional ... we have all death in wait   - That's how it's always been, but still difficult - Congratulations on your 5th place in the contest, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 12:56:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/18/2018 12:01:00 PM
Hi Heidi, I really enjoyed this write. I'm so glad things turned around for you. I believe in miracles too. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved - Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 12:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Alexis :)
Date: 5/16/2018 5:49:00 PM
What an experience, a complete turn-around. To embrace life again and to welcome what lies ahead. Uplifting, written beautifully.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2018 6:00:00 PM
Thank you Sandra :)
Date: 5/16/2018 12:02:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading this poem Heidi. The flow and rhythm are quite pleasant. Best for a win.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2018 12:12:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed this :)
Date: 5/16/2018 10:45:00 AM
Nice You see you understnd all kind of styles And know how to write a poem Im more raw i only understnd what i do Thanks for your comnt today You should read my history poems tjey put you in tje middle od tje battlefield rspecially the civil war ill srnd it to you and i will read more of yours
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2018 11:19:00 AM
Ok. Thank you Marc. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 5/16/2018 10:00:00 AM
The gift of more time, and it does happen. Well written Heidi. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2018 10:14:00 AM
Yes, Tom. It does happen. Thank you for your visit and comment on this :)
Date: 5/16/2018 9:37:00 AM
A wonderful entry for the contest, Heidi Rich in emotion and feeling. Happy Wednesday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2018 9:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Mike. I appreciate all your support, always. Happy Wednesday xxoo :)
Date: 5/16/2018 8:35:00 AM
Beautifully poem Heidi...Well penned
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2018 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph :)
Date: 5/16/2018 8:16:00 AM
Oh well done Heidi! Eloquent impacting ink, it should place well in Constance's contest, good luck! xomo :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/16/2018 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Maureen :)

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