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I Am Your Child

why can't you show me?..... Why can't your know me? please love me...for I am your child... I need your strong sense of reaching out... breaking away from do's and don'ts, loving me with grateful smiles, because I'm yours... together we can learn to appreciate the freshness of life, the cool, sweet newnesses, perhaps now dimmed in your own... I am your child...why can't you show me? what i need from you is your quiet understanding... that will web me in your wisdom's gile. I need your presence, denied me by today's standards. I need to grow toward you and you toward me i am your child...do you love me? I need your example to support me, much more than your advice your tolerance, your sense of humor, I need you to remember what it was to be inexperienced, or sometimes foolish... I am your child... I need your help; we need each other. let me do for you and you do for me I need you to listen to what I dream, to what i feel and to let me know that you treasure my sharing... I am your child... I am your diamond in the rough, I feel it will take forever to know who i really am help me find myself, do you love me?...will you show me? I am your child. please love me, please love me, please don't ignore me ....................................................... "It Shouldn't Hurt To Be A Child" contest Sponsored by Becca Teagan

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Date: 7/15/2009 4:25:00 PM
Carrie - Congratulations on placing in Nathan’s contest – I apologize for it taking so long for me to say it, God Bless you Carrie - Thank you for your continued support and friendship, YF4L, MJ
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Date: 6/29/2009 12:23:00 PM
A very powerful write and deserving of your 4th place win in the contest... I am also happy with my honorable mention
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Date: 6/28/2009 12:49:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Nathan's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/27/2009 11:16:00 PM
Carrie, congrats with your placement in Nathan's contest...Raul
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Date: 6/27/2009 8:41:00 PM
Congratulations on 4th place in my contest! Nate
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Date: 5/29/2009 11:31:00 AM
This is moving on the most basic level. You, my dear, should seriously consider an experiment. I would recommend a one act play. You have the natural flow of dialogue here. It is a natural transition and judging by this, I think that you could do it. Thank you for your kind words regarding my little piece. Regards, GK
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:38:00 AM
I love the plaintive tones evoking the helplessness that marks the moment of true humility ... I love the sense of knowing the missing things of the soul ... I love the pure confessions that lights the blazing candles of your faith ... bravo
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Date: 5/25/2009 12:44:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 5/25/2009 12:43:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/23/2009 7:05:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest. Nate
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Date: 5/23/2009 10:28:00 AM
"I will find me." Great summing up, Carrie, a fit dedication to all the lost kids over the years. Great feeling in this one. Love, daver
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Date: 5/22/2009 10:46:00 AM
Just saw Sue's blog and want to wish you a very happy (belated) birthday! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/22/2009 8:08:00 AM
Really like this kyrielle plaintive approach Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments
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Date: 5/22/2009 6:06:00 AM
Oh Carrie, this is so beautiful. My heart is left thinking of all those who do not have this love. It is of course a give and take, as we do learn so much from our children too, however, the responsibility lies with the parent to give and teach love, along with so many other things. So much here. Powerful. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/22/2009 5:09:00 AM
Very moving Carrie... and all too true... alas
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Date: 5/22/2009 3:42:00 AM
a great powerful write, it is hard for many kids this day and age, my mother left home when I was 11 and i lived with my dad but sometimes I felt like no bodys child, but now I know i am a child of God and always will be, when our parents are nott here for us God always will be, he is the ultimate father of all. God bless you from diane
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Date: 5/21/2009 8:22:00 PM
This is a cry from the most tender of hearts...children. They don't choose who their parents are...wow! This is a great write! Nate
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:42:00 PM
This is such a moving plea, Carrie. I hate the thought of anyone having to beg their parents to love them. God bless you for growing up to be the compassionate woman you are today. A sad but very well expressed write! Love, Carolyn
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