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I Am What I Am

My head slightly bent over a table of happiness. My feet, sod with white lilacs, dance merrily to a moon stroke music of twilight night. My finger-tips childishly sip the sweat of quill, like red wine of Mother Earth that runs down the skin of my heart. Down in the chores of primal things I have been to the bowl aquarium, mostly at nights where I breathed and twitched with the fish, trying to catch the warm winks of stars. Ahh, I know all about human arts, although I dabble in the language of my adopted father; still I know how to sketch in my own words a lovely butterfly, fluttering awhile in the night to say hello and to kiss me, ere on a fluffy pillow of dreams I close my eyes. My name is nothing special, but honestly I am what I am… a poetry dancer, dancing with emotions for my fictitious lover. Author’s note: I wrote it in response to “The Invitation to Write”, by Gather Essentials: Writing Challenge, based on Carl Sandburg’s poem “Who Am I?”

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Date: 3/9/2015 9:24:00 PM
This is one of the best most emotional and meaningful poem I have ever read. It has inspired me to write some more. Jim Horn We are close together in total poetry production. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poets/ top_100_poets_most_poems_all_time.aspx
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Date: 8/14/2009 1:23:00 PM
very good, enjoyed it greatly
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Date: 6/6/2009 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations dear Ernesto.Your poem is wonderful.You deserve win.Best wishes, Fide
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Date: 6/6/2009 9:42:00 AM
Ernesto,..Bravo on this beautiful poem,..and congrats on your win !
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Date: 6/2/2009 4:02:00 PM
Congrats Ernesto. You are a poet. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 6/2/2009 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Great write!
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Date: 6/2/2009 2:29:00 PM
Hi Ernesto - Congratulations on your win in the PSoup Contest! An excellent write! Respectfully, Joe
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Date: 6/1/2009 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations, Ernesto, on your well deserved win. All best, Orma
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Date: 6/1/2009 7:15:00 AM
Congratulatios Ernesto on your win. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2009 3:55:00 AM
Warmest congrats Ernesto on this amazing piece of art! Well deserved. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/1/2009 12:49:00 AM
Hello Mr. Poet, yes, you are what you are. Once again, congratulations and may God continue to bless you with more power and success. ENJOY. Ernilando
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Date: 6/1/2009 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Ernesto . Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/31/2009 10:10:00 PM
Awesome write. Glad to see you win, Ernesto! You're one of the best here at the Soup!! Congratulations.
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Date: 5/31/2009 11:56:00 AM
Awesome E! I like the images in this poem. I can see them clearly. I like the red wine from Mother Earth. Great job! ~J
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Date: 5/31/2009 11:49:00 AM
Way to go Ernest. This is a super win for you. Congratualtions! -ED-
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Date: 5/31/2009 11:09:00 AM
Good for you! wonderful write and well deserved win. Love BG
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Date: 5/31/2009 9:25:00 AM
My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome 5th placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke
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Date: 5/31/2009 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being placed > James
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Date: 5/31/2009 6:37:00 AM
Wonderful writing, how thrilling to be among the "BIG" winners.....Congratulations !!!
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Date: 5/31/2009 5:22:00 AM
Congrats on a beautiful poem Ernesto!
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Date: 5/31/2009 3:39:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/31/2009 2:38:00 AM
Congrats!!!!
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Date: 5/31/2009 12:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, very very nice poem
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Date: 5/30/2009 11:27:00 PM
Congrats on your success in PS contest Ernesto .Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/30/2009 11:05:00 PM
Ernesto congratulations on placing Fifth in the Soup contest, Great job and wonderful to read you - God Bless, MJ
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