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Entry for: Are you a mouse or a mountain poetry contest:

 


Heidi Sands

6/14/24

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Placed 5th in the comtest.

I Am The Mountain

I am the mountain that stands still in the sky,
casting away doubt to all questions why
I stand with strength, the same you are granted
Sharing the beauty of trees that are planted
I do not move with strong wind or fall with rain
I am a symbol to show that all can sustain
I reach high through clouds, to be seen from afar
Always a reminder that you can shine like a star
I change colors with foliage and highlight each season
I provide various scenery to you for a reason
I am the mountain with peace, the birds fly to
I am the calm stillness, that is deep within you
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Date: 7/21/2024 3:16:00 AM
love your mountain dear poet, congrats
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/21/2024 9:25:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 7/20/2024 8:57:00 PM
Hi Heidi! Congrats on placing 5th out of 35 entries in my contest! I loved the last line of your piece, it really nailed it and brought this to a deeper level, literally.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/20/2024 9:05:00 PM
Matt, thank you very much. I appreciate the placement and positive feedback. ! :)
Date: 6/15/2024 8:57:00 PM
Wonderful. I love the majesty coupled with tranquility. Well done, dear.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2024 5:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Eileen :)
Date: 6/15/2024 8:38:00 PM
Simply awesome, Heidi. Behind this mighty mountain is a prodigious pen! Excelsior! :) Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/16/2024 5:50:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment Gershon! I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 6/15/2024 7:33:00 PM
Heidi I love this poem! It is magnetic and beautiful inspiring peace! A fav for me!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2024 7:35:00 PM
Thank you Karen. I am happy you love it and consider it a Fave :) I appreciate it :)
Date: 6/15/2024 7:18:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and feeling, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/15/2024 7:26:00 PM
Thank you Eve :)
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