I Am The Mountain

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Entry for: Are you a mouse or a mountain poetry contest:

Heidi Sands

6/14/24

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Placed 5th in the comtest.

I am the mountain that stands still in the sky, casting away doubt to all questions why I stand with strength, the same you are granted Sharing the beauty of trees that are planted I do not move with strong wind or fall with rain I am a symbol to show that all can sustain I reach high through clouds, to be seen from afar Always a reminder that you can shine like a star I change colors with foliage and highlight each season I provide various scenery to you for a reason I am the mountain with peace, the birds fly to I am the calm stillness, that is deep within you

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/21/2024 3:16:00 AM

love your mountain dear poet, congrats

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/21/2024 9:25:00 AM

Thank you very much :)

Matt Caliri

Date: 7/20/2024 8:57:00 PM

Hi Heidi! Congrats on placing 5th out of 35 entries in my contest! I loved the last line of your piece, it really nailed it and brought this to a deeper level, literally.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/20/2024 9:05:00 PM

Matt, thank you very much. I appreciate the placement and positive feedback. ! :)