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I Am So Hungry Tableau

I am so hungry
                                                           
now ready to eat
                                                           
hot cooked or cold raw
                                                     
a meal or dessert
                                                             
mouth open wider
                                                   
tummy here it comes
Date Written:3/26/2021
Picture #1
3 Place
Tableau 2Contest Judged:3/31/2021
Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 4/2/2021 12:54:00 PM
as I reviewed the pictures again, i realized yours was the shark. Congrats. I thought your idea was cute.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/7/2021 8:15:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulation. Glad you like this fun shark write. Have a blessed day........................
Date: 3/31/2021 10:01:00 PM
Great imagery, Paula, congratulation on you win. Have a blessed Easter. Hugs Eve
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/1/2021 9:34:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulation. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day and Easter with hugs............
Date: 3/31/2021 3:40:00 PM
I like your humorous take on the picture, Paula! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/1/2021 9:33:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your congratulation. Glad you like my humorous hungry shark write. Have a blessed day and Easter.................
Date: 3/30/2021 11:41:00 AM
- I would never dare to be in the sea with this hungry guy, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/31/2021 9:16:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like my hungry shark write. Have a blessed day and Easter.................
Date: 3/28/2021 2:22:00 PM
It's too bad you can't get the picture with it. It was a lion , right? Way to do it, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. I took the weekend off from soup. Real busy. So glad you like my hungry shark write. It is #1 shark. Have a blessed day/week.................
Date: 3/28/2021 9:38:00 AM
I had lunch at noon, Paula, and your lovely poem is tempting me to go grab something else to eat now! ~ Best regards // paul
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2021 8:32:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. I took the weekend off from soup. Real busy. Sorry, I made you want to eat again. So glad you like my hungry shark write. Have a blessed day/week.................
Date: 3/27/2021 8:45:00 AM
These days for me not much tastes the way it used to. I can understand your meaning here though. Good job. God Bless, JB
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2021 8:29:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. I took the weekend off from soup. Real busy. Glad you like my hungry shark write. Have a blessed day/week.................
Date: 3/26/2021 9:17:00 PM
Oh the ads covered the picture!! But this cute poem let me see the picture so vividly. Have a great day dear Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/29/2021 8:28:00 AM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my hungry write. Have a blessed day/week.................
Date: 3/26/2021 4:06:00 PM
Yes, that monster looks hungry and ready to swallow. Well captured, Paula. All the best.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2021 4:44:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Glad you like this hungry write. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Date: 3/26/2021 4:02:00 PM
Makes me hungry just reading it. Good write.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2021 4:43:00 PM
Thanks for your note. After this write, I am hungry. Glad you like it. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Date: 3/26/2021 3:40:00 PM
Way to fix a rumbling tummy! :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/26/2021 4:42:00 PM
Thanks for your note. You are so right. Big tummy. Have a blessed day/weekend.................

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