written for the emotions contest sponsored by Andrea D. This little rhyme took me hours and more to write! Always love trying these new forms.
I’m like the rain, lamenting with despair. I ache to feel the stars in golden skies. My heart, a mirror cracked beyond repair, it echoes hymns of grief in somber sighs, like herbs of hurt, that moonlight will declare.
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