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I Am God and This Is My Story

the way i made things the way they should to be man is the image of me women the image of my goal the universe made for she and man but a pillar like a strong tall pillar man is to stand for she holder of unconditional things holder of her hearts goal seer of what is to be a pillar standing tall like me a chisel is what i made she to etch on the pillar that is the image of me to write her heart apon me scripting her dreams to be binding unconditional things sorrowful is the blank pillar never have felt the cut of she her etching is my goal waiting for her chisel upon me a pillar is empty of things dreaming of script to be untamed and lost is she without the image of me apart the chisel and pillar have but empty things nothing but what could be and a silent distant goal when the chisel meets me script dreams upon a pillar bare unconditional things writer of the seers goal free is the hand of she the etch her dreams on me this is the way i mad things and the they should be a universe for a chisel and pillar

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Date: 7/5/2009 3:36:00 PM
Congrats John on your sestina being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/3/2009 4:23:00 AM
John, This poem has a very interesting perspective. It is thought provoking, too. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. It is a very complex idea of relationships. Good write. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 6/29/2009 6:54:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured God bless you from diane
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Date: 6/29/2009 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Carol
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Date: 6/28/2009 11:58:00 PM
Nicely penned and I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations. I have also a featured poetry. Ernilando
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