Notes About The Poem

- I Am Closer To Fine, Thank You Very Much -

The power within you is unique
   if you are true to yourself
   Today closer to fine
   Navigating your inner self
   changing landscapes
   shadow pages and the imprint of the past
   fear fake investors
   The word had a different meaning
   than expected
   Today closer to fine

   It is possible
   to rise again after a fall
   Today closer to fine
   Trauma and mental disorders
   let go of your expectations
   hidden patterns and habits
   One step forward and two to the side
   move slowly and regularly from side to side
   Nobody cares if you can't dance well
   Reward yourself with positive affirmations
   Today closer to fine




   20.02.2023
   Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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   Poem of the Day 21.02.2023
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Scorpio Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 3:55 AM
Such an Exquisite piece! Congratulations on POTD! Warmly A.S.
Andresen Avatar
April 21, 2023 at 2:13 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, A.S. :) - hugs
Bangalee Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 8:44 PM
It is possible/ to rise again after a fall/ Today closer to fine///- just greatly written; nice poetic expression; great to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 2:34 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Mahtab :) - hugs
Clarke Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 12:37 PM
An anthem for life's trials and tribulations. Really well done! Congratulations Sunshine :)
Andresen Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 2:34 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, W.J. :) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 8:52 AM
Congratulations on POTD Sunshine Smile! Soulful, a great message you give us, a dance is just a dance. If you fell down yesterday, stand up today—H.G.Wells
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 8:55 AM
- Thank you Anaya, I did not feel down yesterday :) - hugs
Eslinger Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Yes! This poem is quite more than fine! Congratulations! It is a Message for Life! hugs, Sally’s p9c
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 7:26 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Sally :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 12:26 AM
A full-fledged message with thought-provoking positive concepts and practical suggestions. Congratulations!
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:01 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Alex :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 8:23 PM
Congratulations, Anne-Lise! Very nice!
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:01 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Kim :) - hugs
Nicole Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 7:20 PM
"The power within you is unique." I completely agree. I also believe that you should be, "true to yourself." Your thoughts hold so much truth, Anne-Lise. This is tender, emotional and encouraging, all at the same time. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:02 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Brandy :) - hugs
Rolland Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 6:05 PM
precious message, thanks
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:02 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Vann :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 4:02 PM
A fine Free verse poem Anne-Lise, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:02 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Belle :) - hugs
Messina Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 1:07 PM
Beautifully written, Anne-Lise. A huge Congratulations for a very well deserved POTD! Hugs // Charlie
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:03 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Charlie :) - hugs
Doll Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Anne-Lise, your poem has brought me " closer to fine" today. Congratulations on POTD. Sending hugs your way~ Warren
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:03 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Warren :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 11:04 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. Hugs... Enjoy your blessed day/win writing away.................
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:03 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Paula :) - hugs
La France Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 10:33 AM
Sunshine, a beautifully penned poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings, Constance
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:04 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Constance :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 6:38 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Anne-Lise. A powerful message on life. Enjoy your day.
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:04 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Vijay :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 6:25 AM
A fine write indeed Anne-Lise! Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:04 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Linda :) - hugs
Chuuk Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you on you honor, Sunshine. Have a fabulous day :)
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:05 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Fin :) - hugs
May Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:43 AM
"Navigate the inner self" to be a better person on the inside, Very nicely done Anne, Congrats on POTD...
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:05 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Joseph :) - hugs
George Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:26 AM
"Nobody cares if you can't dance well/ Reward yourself with positive affirmations? Beautiful poem full of positive vibes ! Congratulations Smile on your well deserved POTD
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:05 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Valsa :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 4:35 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :)
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:06 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Heidi :) - hugs
M  Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 3:48 AM
Congratulations Sunshine on POTD! Debx
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:06 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Deb :) - hugs
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 3:44 AM
Congratulations Anne-Lise on a well deserved emotive POTD, I’m am closer to fine now for reading your soul enhancing work, cheers David
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:06 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, David :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 3:38 AM
Anne-Lise, well penned, congratulations on POTD!
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:07 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Tania :) - hugs
Turner Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 3:20 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Anne Lise. A very uplifting message from a beautiful tender soul. Have a great day:)
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:07 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Daniel :) - hugs
Daniel Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 2:50 AM
A lovely poem on self-esteem, Anne-lise, congratulations on your POTD:)
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:07 AM
- Thank you for your congratulations ... much appreciated, Jo :) - hugs
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